Mended Heart
Locks of Love
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GOT7 (JB)-Forever Love
~Author POV~
Jackson: Here
He handed you a lock and a permanent marker.
You: What should I write?
Jackson: Well, whatever you want to write; whatever you wish for or something you want
to keep as a promise.
You: Hmm…
Jackson stood up and started walking off.
You: Jackson-ah, where are you going?
Jackson: A place where no one will stare at my writing.
~Your POV~
I just gave him a “seriously” glance; he just winked and walked off.
There’s so many things I want to write, to wish for, and I want to write all of them on this
one lock. It was really hard to decide on the most significant wish; I saw children laughing
and running around in the distance and finally got an idea.
~Jackson’s POV~
Ugh~ What do I wish for? Eternal love? Eternal happiness? I looked around for some
inspiration.
My eyes stopped at a couple sitting on a bench; both had white hair, grown from age.
They were sitting shoulder to shoulder, chattering, grinning from ear to ear and marveling
at the view. I smiled, as I got an idea.
~Your POV~ -time skip of ten minutes-
You: And… done!!
I wonder if Jackson’s done. I looked around and finally found him smiling at himself while
writing. I giggled at how adorable he looked, unaware that I was standing behind him.
Without disturbing him, I took out my phone and slowly took a picture of him to keep as a
momento. I smiled in satisfaction as I set the photo as my lock screen and calmly put my
phone back into my pocket; I walked toward him. He looked up at me and smiled.
Jackson: I’m done; are you?
I smiled and nodded.
Jackson: Good, let’s trade then.
You: Huh??
Jackson: Let’s trade so we can read each other's’ locks.
I shyly passed him my lock, worried about his reaction toward my message. Jackson
confidently gave me his.
We stared at the writing on the locks.
The lock said: //translation from Korean to English//
“I’m with the girl of my dreams; what more could I ask for? My biggest wish is that
we will stay together for eternity, even beyond the grave. I want to stay together, married or not; one day, we’ll age, hopefully together, and we’ll come back here from the pushing
of nostalgia on the same day we wrote on these locks just to rejoice the times of our life
we had together.”
-Jackson //mm/dd/yyyy//
J❤(Y/N)
My heart fluttered; I could feel the tears threatening to spill out of my eyes.
Notes
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