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Redemption

Chapter 5

Chang Sun looked up at the small building in front of him, he had waited for this for a very long time. He carefully walked forward and knocked on the door.
”Who is it?” He heard a voice from the other side.
”I'm from the gas company.” Chang Sun said calmly and he could here footsteps coming from the other side of the door.
”What do you want now.” The door opened revealing a tall man with short black hair.
”Hello.” Chang Sun said cold and looked at the man.
”Lee Chang Sun.” The man froze and his eyes widen.
”Long time no see, Hyung.” Chang Sun opened the door fully witch caused the other man to fall to the floor.


”What do you want?” The man crawled backwards until he hit the wall.
”I want answers.” Chang Sun crouched before the man. ”Why?”
”Why? Why what?” The man swallowed loudly.
”Why did you say it? Why did you say it was me?” Chang Sun meet the man's gaze.
”Because you killed them, you killed all of them!” The man suddenly yelled. ”Don't you remember it, all those people you killed!?”


Chang Sun closed his eyes, he had been through this before, the same question over and over again. Don't you remember?
”I didn't kill anyone.” Chang Sun opened his eyes and looked at the man again.
”Of course you did, i saw you, you're a fucking psychopath!” The man yelled.
”I never killed anyone, trust me Hyung.” Chang Sun said cold.
”No, i saw it.. i saw it and after you killed him you.. you.. that look on you're face.” The man looked down on his hands. ”You told me.. you told me that you was sad he died.. but you were smiling.. always smiling. You started to forgetting things that happened minutes earlier and every time you blacked out you killed someone! You got that!”
”No, I didn't!” Chang Sun quickly stood up looking at the man.
”Yes you did, You killed all of them. You Lee Chang Sun is a murderer!” The man yelled.


Chang Sun crotched down closer to the man and looked at him.
”I really didn't kill them.” Chang Sun said calm looking into the man's eyes before his hand suddenly shot forward, grasping around the man's throat.


”Hey! Lee Chang Sun, were are you kid!”
Chang Sun turned his head towards the door as he heard the words, but he didn't let go oh the man's throat.
”Were looking for you, where are you?”
The door slowly opened and three people walked in.

Notes

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bondanella bondanella
9/26/15

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oneyoudonotsee oneyoudonotsee
8/15/15

The story seems pretty good ... can't wait to read more