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Redemption

Chapter 4

Where exactly are we going?” Young bae asked and looked out the car window.
”Were going to start from where he escaped and then work from there.” Min ho answered as he stopped the car by the side of the road.
”Let's go then.” Ji Hoon stepped out and the others followed him towards a black van that stood a couple of meters from them.
”What happened here?” Won Sik looked at the crashed car.
”He knocked the driver out so they crashed.” Min ho looked at the car.
”With a crash like this he should be in pretty bad shape.
”Apparently he knocked the three guards unconscious and used one of them as protection.” Ji Hoon opened the door and looked inside the van.
”How did you know that?” Jun Hong asked looking over his shoulder.
”The driver said it.” Ji Hoon stepped back from the van.


”He's still alive?” Young bae asked.
”Yeah, non of them were killed.” Min ho nodded.
”Why would he not kill them, it would have made it so much harder to find him?” Jun Hong asked confused.
”Well he's really one of a kind, not your average criminal.” Ji Hoon sighed and looked around.
”What do you mean?” Won Sik asked coming out of the van.
”I'll tell you when we got that guy, right now we need to...” Ji Hoon grew silent.
”What is it?” Min ho asked and Ji Hoon pointed towards a sign on the other side of the road.
”What do you mean?” Young bae looked at the sign confused.


”There's a person living in that area, he testified against Chang Sun in court and is the reason he went to prison in the first place.” Ji Hoon explained.
”Do you think Chang Sun is going there?” Min ho asked.
”I'm sure of it, let's go!” Ji Hoon walked back towards the car.

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9/26/15

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8/15/15

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