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Redemption

Chapter 6

”Okay, remember you can't kill him.” Ji Hoon looked at the people infront of him. ”If you have to you can nock him out but i don't want any broken bones or stab wounds, is that clear?”
”Yeah, what ever..” Young bae sighed.
”Can we go now?” Jun Hong asked.
”Yeah, but remember what i just said!” Ji Hoon nodded before they started walking down the street.


”Witch house is it?” Min ho asked looking around.
”If i remember right it's that one.” JI Hoon pointed towards a hose further away.
”That bastard is mine!” Young bae said and started running towards the house.
”Not if i get him first!” Jun Hong ran after him.
”Ant you going after them?” Ji Hoon looked at Won Sik.
”Nah, go ahead.” He sighed and looked towards the building.
”Min ho, go after them.” Ji Hoon looked at the young detective.
”Yes sir.” Min ho sighed and started running towards the hose.


When he retched it he stopped. Before him two people stood, arguing.
”He's mine!” Young bae said through his teath.
”I was here first.” Jun Hong calmly stated.
”You litle brat, i will punch you so you can't..”
”Hey, were on a mission here.” Min ho said and walked up to them.
”So what, that's not going to stop me from breaking this kid's neck!” Young bae sneard.
”Yes it is, if you do that you will be sent back to prison and you will stay there an extra ten years, understand?” Min ho crossed his arms and looked cold at the two.


”Well witch door is it?” Jun Hong pointed at the two doors before them.
”I don't..” Min ho stopped when he heard someone yell from the other side of one of the doors.
”I would guess that one.” Jun Hong walked up to the door and pressed his ear to it.
”Yes you did, You killed all of them. You Lee Chang Sun is a murderer!” a man yelled from inside.
”Yeah, it's definitely the right door.” Jun Hong nodded.
”Well what now?” Young bae asked.
”I'm going to go around to the back.” Jun Hong turned around and walked around the house.


”Should we just run in?” Young bae looked at Min ho.
”No, we should be careful with what..”
”Hey! Lee Chang Sun, were are you kid!”
The two men turned towards Ji Hoon.
”What are you doing?” Min ho looked angry at the older man.
”Were looking for you, where are you?” Ji Hoon slowly opened the door and walked inside together with Min ho and Young bae.


On the floor upset them two men sat. One of them had his hand around the other's throat and was slowly cutting off his air supplies.
”Chang Sun, there's no turning back if you do this.” Ji Hoon drew his gun and pointed it towards the man.
”This thing really hurts, just warning you.”
”Sir, do you think this is really.”
”We can do this the hard way, the easy way or the painful way.” Ji Hoon interrupted Min ho.


But the Chang Sun didn't let go of the other man.
”Okay, the painful way.” Ji Hoon smiled and raised his gun.
Before anyone could react he fired a shot that flew right into Change Sun's arm. The man quickly stood up grasping his arm before he turned around and ran towards the back door.

Notes

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9/26/15

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8/15/15

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