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Redemption

Chapter 3

”Lee Chang Sun!”
Chang Sun looked up from the book he had been reading just as the door to his cell opened. Two guards came into his cell.
”Come with us.” The first one said and looked at him.
Chang Sun closed his book and stood up, what did they want this time?

They leed him to another room where they tossed him some clothes and told him to get changed. He quickly put on the white T-shirt, the dark jeans and the black sneakers before picking up the dark gray hoodie. Then he turned towards the two guards who quickly handcuffed him before leading him towards the exit.


When they walked out into the sunlight Chang Sun got a weird feeling, he hadn't been outside for a long time and the sun almost blinded him.
”This way!” One of the guards pushed him towards a black van that was parked outside the prison.
Chang Sun didn't even question it when they told him to get in, he just stepped into the van where three people sat. There eyes was always upon him, following his every move as they drove of. He ignored them and turned to look out the window instead, but he could feel their eyes boring holes in the back of his neck.


”Shit, are they serious?”
Chang Sun looked up when he heard the driver speak.
”What is it?” The man beside Chang Sun asked.
”It's stoop, a traffic accident.” The driver sighed.
”Isn't there another way to get there?” Another man asked.
”Yeah, but it's an old road.”
”Well we don't have a choice, do you know the way?”
”Yeah, of curse, but you will have to call detective Jung to tell him were going to be late.” The driver nodded and turned the car around.


Chang Sun listened carefully to the conversation. He still had no idea where they were going but he didn't really care that much. He looked out the window again and saw that they turned onto a smaller road. It wasn't any other cars or people in the area.
He turned his eyes back towards the others in the car, would it be possible to take them out without killing anyone?
All of them had guns, it would take approximately 3,5 seconds for them to draw them. But if he coute them by surprise it would take them 5,7 seconds to draw them. If he first took care of the guy in front of him who only needed 4,7 seconds to fire a clean shot towards him, that would take 2,5 seconds. Then the guy on his right because he had better access to his gun it would take him 5,3 seconds to fire, That would take 1,7 seconds to do. The last guy would need 6 seconds to fire but it would take 2,1 seconds to take him out. That means Chang Sun could take them out in 6,1 seconds witch should be fine.


The driver would have the hardest time defending himself. Chang Sun's eyes fell upon a stun gun in one of the men's belt. That would be perfect for the driver.
”What are you looking at bastard?”
Chang Sun looked up at one of the men.
”I asked you a question, answer it!” The man said after a while but Chang Sun only looked away again.
”Ahh.. this brat..” The man mumbled.


After exactly 6 minutes and 28 seconds Chang Sun took his chance. He started by kicking the guy in front of him in the head, knocking him out. After that he turned to the man on his right hand with the help of his elbow he knocked him out as well.
”You baster..” Was all the guy on my left manedge to say before Chang Sun did the same with him.


He quickly grabbed the stun gun and before the driver had understand what happened he pressed it to the driver's chest. After that he quickly pulled one of the body's before himself to use as an airbag. He flew forward as the van collided with a street lamp but thanks to the man before him he didn't get hurt. he grabbed the keys to the handcuffs and unlock them quickly.


Before he walked out the van he cast a gaze over the four bodys, it looked like everyone was still alive. He quickly walked out of the van and looked around. A big sign cout his attention, he knew exactly where he were and he knew exactly where he was going. With a quick movement he pulled the hood over his head to cover his face before he started walking down the road.

Notes

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9/26/15

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8/15/15

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