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Redemption

Chapter 2

”Sit down.” Min ho said and pointed towards some chairs in the back of the room.
”Who do you think you are, ordering me around?!” One of the men said, Min ho recognized him as Dong Young bae, a gangster.
”Just sit down, you will get your explanation soon.” Min ho sighed and looked around, where had Ji Hoon gone?
”How about you explain it to us now, before i break you're neck!” Young bae said ad took a step closer to Min ho.

”Yah! Sit down you bastard!” Ji Hoon walked into the building through the back door.
”You...” Young bae said through his teeth and looked at the newcomer.
”Long time no see Young bae, how is life?” Ji Hoon smirked at the man.
”You bastard, I'll kill you!” Young bae yelled.
”I wouldn't do that, i'm the oly reason you're not in a prison right now.” Ji Hoon shock his head as a warning.
”I swore that the next time we meet I would beat you ro death!” Young bae fisted his hands.


”Hey big guy, calm down.”
All of them turned to see the other man siting on a shair watching them amused.
”And who the fuck are you?!” Young bae looked at the man angry.
”As i said before, maybe i tell you some time, but not now..” The man smiled.
”Brat, you really are gating on my nerves..” Young bae mumbled.
”Just sit down Young bae, i will explain everything when the other's get here.” Ji Hoon sighed and looked out the window.
”The other's?” The siting man looked at Ji Hoon curious.


”Yeah, were still waiting for two more..” Ji Hoon said looking back towards the room
”Who?” Young bae asked and slowly sat down.
”Just some people, looks like one of them is already here.” Ji Hoon smirked as the sound of a car door closing echoes outside.
”Who is it?” Min ho asked looking towards the door.
”You'll see soon, I'll go and get him.” Ji Hoon walked out the door, closing it after him.


”What now?” Jun Hong asked looking after the car. He looked around and saw that he was standing outside an old building, what the hell was he doing here? Just as he turned back to the building the doors opened and a man stepped out. He was wearing a black suite and looked to be in his early thirties.
”Good, now it's only one left.” The man smiled.
”Who are you?” Jun Hong asked gazing at the man.
”Come with me, I'll explain everything.” The man opened the door and Jun Hong walked after him into a dark room.


”Sit down.” The man in the suite said and Jun Hong sat down.
He looked towards the people beside him and then at the man standing infront of them.
The man that showed him inside had gone out again and from what Jun Hong could hear it sounded like he was talking to someone, probably on his phone.
”What is it?” The man infront of them said when he came back inside.
”We will have to start, the fourth is late.” The man sighed and walked up infront of them.


”Will you tell us what's going on now?” The muscular man beside me said angry.
”Yeah, allow me to introduce myself, I'm detective Jung Ji Hoon and this is detective Choi Min ho.” The man said and pointed towards the man beside him.
”Why are we here?” Jun Hong asked.
”You're here to help us.” Ji Hoon said smirking.
”Why would we help you?” The man sitting furthest away from Jun Hong asked.
”If you help us we will take away two years of you're penalty.” Ji Hoon said calm.
”For real?” Jun Hong asked surprised.
”Yeah, for real.” Ji Hoon nodded.
”What do we have to do?” The muscular man asked.
”Help us catch a serial killer.” The other detective said, Min ho.


”That's all.. no catch?” Jun Hong Asked.
”That's it, any questions?” Ji Hoon smirked.
”I have one question, who are they?” The muscular man asked looking at Jun Hong and the other man.


”Oh right, let me introduce you.” Ji Hoon said and pointed towards the man farthest away from Jun Hong. ”Kim Won Sik, 22 years old. In jail for breaking an entry, armed robbing and murder.” After that Ji Hoon turned towards the muscular man. ”Dong Young bae, 27 year's old. In jail for murder, drug dealing, illegal gambling, smuggling and assault.” Lastly he turned toward Jun Hong. ”Choi Jun Hong, 18 years old. In jail for murder and assault.”


”Hey, i've herd about you.” Won Sik looked towards Jun Hong.
”Oh really.. i can't say the same for you..” Jun Hong met the gaze.
”Well i haven't heard of any of you guys..” Young bae mumbled looking between them.


”I have a question.” Won Sik turned to Ji Hoon.
”What?”
”You said the fourth is late, who else is coming?” Won Sik asked.
”Oh, you may have heard of him, he's name is..” Ji Hoon got interrupted by his phone ringing.


”One second.” He turned his back to them and put the phone to his ear. It was quiet for awhile before he put his phone down.
”What is it?” Min ho asked.
”It looks like we have to start right away.” Ji Hoon smiled.
”What about the fourth person?” Won Sik asked.
”He's the reason we have to start right away.”
”What are you talking about?” You bae asked confused.
”It looks like he's escaped on his way here, you're first mission is to find him.” Ji Hoon smiled.
”Well who is he?” Jun Hong asked standing up.

”He's name is Lee Chang Sun.”

Notes

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9/26/15

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8/15/15

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