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Redemption

Chapter 1

”Are you sure this is a good idea sir?” Min ho asked looking worried at his mentor.
”Of course i'm not sure.” Ji Hoon sighed and reached down for his bag.
”If i may ask, who exactly are in the team.” Min ho's eyes followed Ji Hoon's hand when he pulled up a file from his bag.
”You don't need to know, yet.” Ji Hoon smiled and opened the file so Min ho couldn't see it.
”Are you serous right now, if i'm going to work with criminals i want to know who they are!” Min ho hit the table hard.
”Take it easy, don't get ahead of yourself.” Ji Hoon laughed.
”Get ahead of myself? This are criminals were talking about, animals! If i don't get to know who they are i might as well drop out!”
”Calm down you bird brain!” Ji Hoon looked irritated at Min ho.
”Bird brain? You..” Min mumbled and leaned back in his shair.

”Well we better go and meet them then, let's go.” Ji Hoon stood up and started walking towards the exit.
”Exactly where are we going?” Min ho asked when he cout up with the other.
”You will see, it's not so far away.” Ji Hoon said without looking at him.
”I swear to god you will be the death of me..” Min ho sighed as he followed the older man to a small building in the outskirts of the city. It looked pretty run down with cracks in the wall and overgrown windows.


”Are you sure this is the best place?” Min ho carefully opened the door witch looked like it would break at any second.
”It will do for the time being.” Ji Hoon nodded as he walked further into the building.
”I see you have prepared already..” Min ho said and looked at the big borde full with pictures.
”Yeah, the basic facts are up there. All the victims, names, where they were found and all the evidence we found on the crime scene.” Ji Hoon let his gaze travel over the bored.
”This bastard..” Min ho sighed.
”Well let's catch him then, the other's should be here any moment.” Ji Hoon looked at his clock.
”Can you at least tell me there names before they get here?” Min ho asked just as the sound of a car door closing was heard outside.
”Too late, looks like they are here!” Ji Hoon smiled and sat down on a shair by the wall. ”Go and show them in.”


”Hey! Where am i!” Young bae yelled but the car drove off before he got an answer.
”That bastard...” Young bae mumbled and looked around.
To his left a small building stood, was he supposed to go in. He had no idea what was happening, he had been ordered to change out of his prison clothes and then they just left him here, what was he suppose to do?


Just as he thought that the sound of another car was heard and a big black van stooped some meters away. The door opened and a black haired man stepped out. He was dressed in a simple black shirt and dark jeans. He turned back towards the van to say something but it just drove away.


”Who are you?” Young bae asked looking at the man.
”I could ask you the same question, but i think i already know..” The man smiled. ”Dong Young bae, right?”
”How did you know?” Young bae asked and fisted his hand, who dose this punk think he is?
”I know a lot..” The other smiled before looking around. ”But i'm not sure why I'm here.”
”Who are you?” Young bae asked angry.
”Maybe i tell you some time, but not now..” The man said and turned towards the building beside them.
”You little punk.. let me teach you exactly what happened it you insult me!” Young bae walked towards the man but stopped when he heard a voice behind him.


”Hey, no fighting!”
Both men turned around and saw someone come down the stares from the building. He had dark brown hair and wore a simple suite.
”Who are you?” Young bae asked confused and lowered his fist.
”I'll tell you later, for now follow me.” The man said and turned around.
Young bae didn't move but the man beside him slowly followed the other into the building.

”What the hell is going on here?” Young bae mumbles to himself before he to walked towards the building.

Notes

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9/26/15

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8/15/15

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