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Redemption

Chapter 17

Min Ho stretched as he walked out into the big room. He didn't make it more then three meters before he noticed the bright yellow paper on the nearby table.
'I'm out with Chanh Sun, the esigment for today is group work, two and two going looking. Young bae and Jun Hong, Min ho and Won sik.'
Min ho started at the paper with an irritated look, he really hated how bossy Ji Hoon could be.
"Hey, where's the big guy?" Young bae asked ad he walked into the room followed by Jun Hong and Won sik.
"Ji Hoon and Chang Sun is out." Min ho sighed.
"Then what are we going to do?" Jun Hong asked sitting down on the nearest chair.
"Jun Hong, you and Young bae is going to be one team, me and Won sik one and Ji Hoon and Chang Sun is one."Min ho quickly explained.
"Wait, we're going to work with a partner? " Young bae said not to happy about tha idea.
"Apparently.." Min ho sighed.
"That sounds fine. " Won sik said, he seemed to be the only one okay with it.
"What should we do?" Jun Hong asked.
"I don't know, look around and see if you find anything, ask some people, do what ever you can to find the killer. " Min ho said and shruggled.
"And I'm going with this kid?" Young bae asked looking at Jun Hong.
“I’m going to work with the no brainer?” Jun Hong sighed standing up.
“Who are you calling a no brainer kid?” Young bae said angry.
“Who are you calling a kid no brainer?” Jun Hong sneard back.

“Okay okay, calm down.” Min ho stepped in between them with a plastic bag in his hand. “Take one each.”
“What is it?” Won sik quickly reached into the plastic bag Min ho was holding and lifted up a cellphone.
“Wow, nice!” Jun Hong quickly took up one as well followed by Young bae.
“This is in case you need to contact us, do that as son as you find anything.” Min ho said wanting to get going as soon as possible.
“Okay, so when do we start?” Won sik asked puting the phone into his pocket.
“Let’s go at once.” Min ho said and started to walk but stopped. “Before i forget it if you look in the white bag by the table there should be three walets. the black one it Young bae, the gray is Jun Hong and the blue is Won sik, you got all you could need in there.

When all of them had taken their wallets they split up outside the building by the two remaining cars. Min ho and Won sik got into the black van whilst Young bae and Jun Hong got into the small white sport car driving of.

“Where are we heading?” Won sik asked Min ho who was siting by the well.
“I thought we could find a place in the middle of the crime scenes.” Min ho answered.
“Why?”
“I heard you are an excellent hacker.” Min ho cas a look at the man beside him.
“I know my way around a firewall or two.” Won sik nodded.
“Well we have all we need here.” Min ho nodded towards the back of the van.
When Won sik turn around he noticed all the cables, computer screens and other stuff in the back.
“Let’s do this!” He smiled big turning his attention back towards the road.

Some time later Nim ho drove into a parking lot in front of a big gray house with a big sign up front reading ‘Mirror high’
“Well that’s a peculiar name for a school.” Won sik stated as they both got out of the van.
“This is right in the middle of the crime zone so this should be perfect.” Min ho opened the back of the van and both of them climbed inside.
“This is amazing!” Won sik immediately sat down in front of the biggest screen.
“I thought we could trak the victims the hours before they got killed, creditcards, CCTV anything.” Min ho said and Won sik immediately begun typing.

Notes

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9/26/15

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8/15/15

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