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Redemption

Chapter 18

“Where are we going?” Jun Hong looked at Young bae who sat before the steering wheel.
“I know some people who might have heard something.” Young bae answered driving into a empty parking lot before what seemed to be an abandoned factory.
“But i also know some people you know.” Jun hong replied stepping out of the car.
“Well whoever they are they can wait.” Young bae slammed the car door shut and started walking towards a small red door.


Just as they reached the door a bang was heard from the inside. Young bae quickly through the door open and stepped inside, Jun hong creeped up behind him, looking over the others shoulder. The room was dim but from what Jun hong could see it was painted in a dark red color with lots of tables and sofas all over it, it looked a little like a bar. In the middle of the room ten four guy’s stood on a pile of broke tables and chairs.
“Where did they go?” One of them said, the one with short blonde hair.
“I don’t know, i don’t even know how manny of them there is.” one of the two black haired guys answered.
“There five i think.” The other black haired man said looking around.
“Do we even know what they want?” The white haired man asked.


“Finish this contract and getting our money, but you four just want die will you.” A voice came from nowhere and Jun Hong froze. He knew that voice, he knew that voice very well.
“Who the hell are you?” The blond man asked.
Suddenly five people came out from the shadows, surrounding the four men in the middle of the room. Jun Hong was just about to yell to them but he wasn't quick enough.


“Yah! I’m gone for two years and this is what i find when i come back!?” All people in the room turend to look at Young bae while Jun hong quickly hid in the nearest shadow.
“Who are you?” one of the attacing men asked, his gray-black hair almost covering his eyes.
“Young bae!” The four men in the middle yelled happy and a bit confused.
“I’m the one that’s going to kick all you’re asses!” Young bae said taking a couple of stepes forward, that was Jun hong’s cue.


“Seriously, we just got here! can’t you wait until we got what we came for before you get beaten up?” Jun hong said, still hiding in the shadows.
All in the room jumped looking around for a sorse of the sound except for Young bae.
“What are you babbling about kid, i’m going to kick there ass back to the freaking stone age!” Young bae yelled.
“No offence but they would kick you’re ass back to fucking big bang, right Yong guk.” Jun hong answered finding it amusing how the gray-black haird guy’s face fell into confusion.
“Yeah of course.. who are you?” He asked.
“Are you friend or foe?” The black haird guy beside him asked.
“It depends.” Jun hong answered thinking.
“Are you with that guy or not?” a dirty blond man in a thick leather jacket pointed at Young bae.
“Sadly kind of yeah, sorry Dae hyun.” Jun hong replied with a sigh.
“Then you’are an enemy.” the gray-black haird guy drew his gun.
“Now now, you’re not going to shot me.” Jun hong smiled, stepping closer to the light so they could see him, but not his face.
“Why wouldn’t I?”
“I’m hurt Hyung, would you really kill you’re maknae?” Jun hong almost laughed as he steped into the light, reviling his face.

Notes

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9/26/15

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8/15/15

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