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Redemption

Chapter 16

"Here, take this." Ji Hoon gave Chang Sun a small plastic bag.
When Chang Sun looked inside he found a pair of thick black glasses, apparently without any glass, twenty or so rubber bands and a cellphone.
Chang Sun looked up at Ji Hoon then back towards the bag.
"Just a small safety precautions, you're image was not leaked to the media but if we were to run into some police they would probably recognise you, that's just a little mask you can say."Ji Hoon explained. "Use the bands to tie you're hair back."
Chang Sun took up one of the rubber bands and used it to gather his hair into a small pony tail before putting on the glasses. Ji Hoon must admit that he looked quite charming with the hair out of he's eyes and the glasses resting on his nose.
Chang Sun took up the phone from the bag and looked at it.
"That's in case you need to contact me or Min ho." Ji Hoon said as he turned around and started walking.
Chang Sun nodded and put the phone inside one of he's pockets before following Ji Hoon.


"Jump in." Ji Hoon said as he opened the front door to the black sports car and sat down.
Chang Sun opened the other door and stepped in, sitting down beside the other.
"Well, let's go then." Ji Hoon smiled and started the car before driving of with an incredible speed.
Chang Sun turned he's head towards the window beside him to see the landscape slowly changing as they drove into the city.
From time to time Ji Hoon cast a quick glance at the moment beside him. He couldn't put he's finger on it but there was something vainly familiar with the man, it wasn't the felling you get when you're thinking 'he looks familiar', no this was more about 'he feels familiar'.
Fifteen minutes later Ji Hoon drove into a big parking lot outside a big building with a signe up front, Police station.


Ji Hoon and Chang Sun both stepped out of the car and looked up at the five stories high building.
"So, we came here because I need you to look over some CCTV in the area where the murders took place" Ji Hoon explained as they started walking towards the building.
"Wait here, I need to have a little talk with some people before we can start." Ji Hoon said as they stopped outside a big glas door.
Chang Sun crossed his legs and leaned against the wall looking out one of the big windows as Ji Hoon walked through the door.


“Omo! Ji Hoon!”
As Ji Hoon walked through the door the people in the room all stood up from there desks looking at him.
“Long time no see.” Ji Hoon smiled at them.
“You should come visit more often.” The man at the front desk walked over to him.
“Sorry Seung Ho, i’m a bit busy right now.” Ji Hoon sighed.
“Yeah, that’s quite a nasty murder case you got there.” Seung Ho nodded.
“Well i’m here for the CCTV.” Ji Hoon said in his business tone.
“Oh right, you said you would bring someone in you’re new team with you.”Seung Ho looked around. “But i don’t see anyone.”
“He’s just outside, but i need to talk to you a little.” Ji Hoon said getting a bit nervus, he knew that the other’s in the room probably wouldn't recognize Chang Sun, but Seung Ho would definitely recognize him.

“What is it?” Seung Ho asked as Ji Hoon pulled him away from the other’s.
“You know the persone and he’s not what you would call a good person.” Ji Hoon scratched he’s head.
“What do you mean?” Seung Ho asked confused. “Who ever he is i’m sure he can’t do anything here.”
“I’m more worried you will do something..” Ji Hoon sighed.
“What are you talking about?” Seung Ho laughed awkwardly, confused by what Ji Hoon said.
“Well, it’s.” Ji Hoon started but got interrupted by Seung Ho.
“Just bring him inside, if he’s you’re new partner i’m sure he’s a good guy, don’t keep him waiting.” Seung Ho said quickly.
“Well.. he’s not really my partner..” Ji Hoon mumbled.
“Just bring him in.” Seung Ho said turning around.

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9/26/15

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8/15/15

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