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Redemption

Chapter 15

Chang Sun’s thoughts was interrupted when a sudden pain shot through his arm, so painful that he fell to the ground. As he clutched his arm he noticed a dark red Spot on the light T-shirt, how could He have forgot! with a great deal of pain he managed to get to the closest chair where he sat down. With his good arm he reached for the red First aid kit he new Lay on the table not far away. As soon as he got it open he picked out what he needed. Bandages, something to clean it, a tweezers, some paper and some painkillers before he rolled up his sleeve and blood immediately began to flow from the small round hole. Chang Sun quickly wipe the tweezers with a paper before slowly lowering it into the open wound and digging around until it closed around a small object. As he pulled it out a small metal bullet followed.


Quickly putting the tweezers down and picking up some of the paper which he drenched in some water. Slowly he begun to clean the wound, drying of all the blood before taking another peace of paper pressing it against the still bleeding wound. With one hand pressed over the paper he picked up some of the bandages. Two bandages later Chang Sun stood up with the first aid kit in his hand. Puting it back where he found it before walking back towards the files sitting down again. He continued reading through the files, trying to find something more. There was something more, he just knew it but he couldn't get his finger on it. Just when he thought he got it he’s thoughts was interrupted again.


“Moring!” Ji Hoon walked into the room. “Sleeped well?”
Chang Sun just cast him a blanck look before looking back towards the files.
“I’ll take that as a no..” Ji Hoon crouched down looking over the other’s shoulder. “Oh right, i have something i need to do.”
Chang Sun moved a little to the right looking at Ji Hoon.
“Yeah, i need you’re genius.” Ji Hoon smiled. “I will take you with me to the police station to look at some CCTV and read through some files, you understand?”
Without changing his facial expression Chang Sun looked towards the door.
“Good, should we get going or do you need some time to get ready?”
Chang Sun took his gray hoodi from the closest chair before standing up.
“Well let’s go then.” Ji Hoon walked towards the door with Chang Sun following him slowly.

Notes

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bondanella bondanella
9/26/15

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8/15/15

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