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Redemption

Chapter 11

'That punk, i have a bad feeling about him..' Young bae thought as he walked down the street to where the last victim had been found.
The body was of course already gone but there was still blood splattered all over the ground and on the wall to his left as well.
”You're move..” Young bae reed the text to himself.
'It has to be some kind of message, probably to the police. This murderer was playing some kind of game.'


Young bae sat down on a bench on the other side of the street overlooking the crime scene.
'What could have caused this much blood? A knife or maybe some kind off axe?'
The blood was spread everywhere, even on the roof to the nearest building. It would take a lot of strength to do something like this, a lot of rage. He remembered the photo of the victim. He was surprised they even got an identity of her.


”What you thinking about?”
Young bea looked up and saw someone stand right around the corner.
”Who are you?” Young bae quickly stood up.
”Take it easy, it's just me..” The person steeped forward and smiled.
”What are you doing here?” Young bae asked Jun Hong irritated.
”I just walked around and saw you siting here.” Jun Hong sighed deep. ”Why is everyone so boring?”
”Go away..” Young bae mumbled.
”But i just came.” Jun Hong looked at the blood on the ground.
”Then i can leve.” Young bae was just about to leve when he heard the other mumbling to himself.


”This is was meyed by an axe, probably about one meter long. If i came behind her all the wounds would be in the back, it would be the easiest way to use it. But the wounds were at the front. So that means i came from the front. But i had to be concealing the axe, otherwise she would have escaped. How did i consile it? Maybe a long coat or just simply behind my back. But if someone would have come from behind they would have seen it, so that would ruen it all. So i must have knowledge of the area and now when this specific spot would be empty except for my victim..”


”What are you mumbling about?” Young bae asked, only hearing some words here and there.
”It's nothing..” Jun Hong said and slowly stood up.
”Tell me.” Young bae grabbed his arm just as he was about to leve.
”It's nothing..” Jun Hong looked into the other's eyes before he continued walking.
”Where are you going?” Young bae asked after him.
”I'm just going back..” Jun Hong answered and disappeared around the corner without so much as a glance back.


”That kid, who dose he think he is?” Yong bae looked after the pink haired boy before turning back to the crime scene.
But just as he was about to walk forward something fell on his hand. He looked down and saw a rain drop slowly gliding down his hand. When he looked to the sky he was meet by big dark clouds hanging low.
”Rain, where did that come from?” He sighed as more drops fell to the sky and he quickly ran under a near by tree. He stood there for about 15 minutes, waiting for the rain to stop before he gave up. It didn't look like it would stop any time soon so the only thing he could do was to run back. He had no desire the get soaked but it was ether running or stand here for another hour.

Notes

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9/26/15

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8/15/15

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