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Redemption

Chapter 10

'This doesn't add up.' Chang Sun thought as he looked at the photo of the first victim and then around the area where she had been found. 'This is way too professional for a first kill, but the second victim is so unorganized, maybe he killed them but the second was found first or maybe...'
”There's more then one..” Chang Sun mumbled looking through the file.
'The first, third, fifth and seventh victim was killed in an almost perfect way, but the second, fourth, sixth and the eighth victim was a rookie job. But apparently the same message had been found at each crime scene, the killer had written You're move on the wall with the victims blood.'


Chang Sun let his hand glide over the wall where he new the text has been written. Of course it was all clean of by now, but he could clearly see it before him.
'You're move? Was it a message for the police or families of the victim, some kind of invitation to play a game? Exactly who was the message for?'
Chang Sun looked up to the sky where gray clouds was gathering.
'It's going to rain.. i've missed the rain.' he thought as he turned around and started walking back towards the headquarters. There was no meaning to dig where.
'The police called this victims of opportunity, but if there not there has to be a connection between them.'


Half an hour later Chang Sun opened the door to the old building and walked in. It was completely empty except for the wind howling over the roof. He sat down cross legged on the floor and opened his file. To his disappointment it didn't have much information about the victims personal life.
But as he looked around he saw a box standing in one f the corner with the text Victims on it. Slowly he stood up and walked over to it and when he opened it he saw a pile of files, all with names on them.


After he sat down again he began reading through the files. It didn't take him more then 15 minutes to finish all the files.
”You can't be able to read that quick.”
Chang Sun turned around and saw a pink haired boy standing looking at him. Of course he immediately knew who it was.
'Choi Jun Hong, 18 years old contract killer. Kills with a knife or other sharp objects. Killed 7 people and one attempted murder. He got caught in the act as he was about to kill a high up politician. Been in prison for 11 months, one week and 3 days.'


Chang Sun looked at the boy before he turned back to the files and finished the last one.
”So.. you're really some kind of genius..” Jun Hong mumbled sitting down on a chair.
Chang Sun just ignored him, he had no intention of chit chatting. He just wanted to finish this as quickly as possible so he could go back.
”You're not really the social type, are you psycho?” Jun Hong asked leaning bach in his chair.
'This kid, can't he see when he should just back o...'


Chang Sun's thought got interupted when the first raindroop fell on the roof. He quickly looked up as the sound of falling rain filled the room.
”Rain huh? Is that you're thing?” Jun Hong asked.
Chang Sun just ignored him and quickly stood up looking towards the door befor he slowly walked out into the rain. He didn't really care that he got soaked, but he couldn't resist the sound and feeling of the rain.


He sat down with his back against the wall on the side of the building and let the rain fall over him. The feeling of it slowly falling over his hair and dripping down his face like tears. He was a psychopath, so he couldn't feel what other feel. Love, loneliness, hate, happiness, sadness, joy, anger, hope, he couldn't feel anything. But in the rain he could feel something, he didn't know what it was. There was something filling up that empty space where normally there was just emptiness. He didn't know what it was, but at least it was something...

Notes

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9/26/15

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8/15/15

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