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Redemption

Chapter 9

”What do you mean maybe, how can you maybe kill someone?” Young bae asked confused but got no answer from Chang Sun.
”Hey, he's talking to you!” Won Sik pushed on Chang Sun's arm btu got no reaction.
”Leave him alone..” Ji Hoon said and walked up to the big bored in the room. ”We have a case to solve.”
”What about him, shouldn't he listen to?” Jun Hong pointed towards the bed.
”No worries, he is listening, probably have for a while.” Ji Hoon said and turned the bored to face the others.
”That little..” Young bae looked towards te bed.
”You will have to get use to it.” Ji Hoon sighed. ”Now focus on the bored please!”
All eyes once again turned towards the front of the room.


”We got a serial killer on the lose, this far he has killed 8 people. Other than that we don't really know much about him. He kills both males and females, no evidence left on the scene. We have found nothing to link the victims to each other. There probably victims of opportunity. Here i have four files with all the details in them, take one each and i will give you one day to find something useful.” Ji Hoon handed the files out. ”Use any means necessary but try to avoid killing if it's possible.”
”Can we go alone or do we have to have some cop following us?” Young bae asked.
”You can go you're own way, but if something happens you will go straight back to prison.” Ji Hoon warned.
”Hey, this is yours.” Ji Hoon cast the last file on the bed beside Chang Sun.
”Is he out again?” Won Sik asked after a while of silence.
”No, i don't think so.” Ji Hoon turned his back towards the bed and walked out of the room followed by Min ho.


”I think he's out.. come on look at him.” Young bae said after a while.
”Yeah.. it doesn't even look like he's breathing.” Jun Hong nodded.
”Hey.. you alive?” Won Sik walked up to the bed and looked down at the man.
Chang Sun lay completely still with his eyes closed, breathing calmly.
”I don't think he's AHH!” Won Sik jumped backwards when Chang Sun suddenly stood up.
”You're not de..” Jun Hong stopped wen Chang Sun just walked out of the room, not even casting a glance at them.


”Where is he of to.” Young bae looked after the man.
”You okay?” Jun Hong looked amused at Won Sik who still looked shocked.
”He's going to be the death of me...” Won Sik mumbled.
”Well i'm going to get started then.” Young bae walked out of the room as well.
”Looks like it's just me and you then.” Won Sik smiled at Jun Hong.
”I'm going.” The younger said and quickly walked out of the room.
”My bad, looks like it's just me.” Won Sik sighed and made his way towards the door.

Notes

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bondanella bondanella
9/26/15

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8/15/15

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