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Huntress

Huntress

If you have completed this story. I ask that you take a few minutes and fill out this survey and post it in the comments. This story is a rough draft and I need a lot of feedback to finish it.

Thank you for taking the time to complete this!

1. What do you think of the following characters personality, names and development during the story?

Kitten "Ro"
Sam
Sean
Rhydian
Damon
Michael
Summoner Adbidial

2. Does this 'world/reality' make sense? Is it confusing?

3. Is the story visual? Can you 'see' the story? Does the story need more description?

4. What do you like about the story?

5. What do you not like about the story?

6. What did you think about the first person point of view? Did you like it? Do you prefer third person?

7. Is there anything you would change or felt did not work in the story?

8. Do you have any suggestions or recommendations?


PLEASE COPY AND PASTE THE QUESTIONS INTO THE COMMENTS THEN ANSWER THE QUESTIONS IN ITALICS.

Thank you!!!


Notes

Comments

FYI: all my stories can be found on asianfanfictions, with the same username. I have been having some issues here so if this place crashes or anything, you can find the same stories there.

DBSKAngel DBSKAngel
8/11/15

This plot is getting onto me! awesome!!!

N_miSone N_miSone
5/19/15
Ro and sean all the way

i love all your characters

I mean your characters description and the stories plot is superb
keep up the good work
exodus2309 exodus2309
4/9/15