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the misstirious game

new school

You were living with your parents till oen day they told you time go live either your grandmother for awhil because she stayed alone ... Anyway you went. When you git out from the bus when you stared walking there was rows of folowers they were realyyyyyyy pretty "yep udah!" You said while walking till you arrived, you knocked the door open it self first you got scared then you remembers him rich your grandmother was and every Door was automatic her house was so big like a palaise well not like a palais it is one. You walked in and saw your grand mother reading a magazine she saw you " oh ! Your here " " mm " you replied you sat and talked for a while " I guess you know where is your room right? " " yes Thx for asking " you went to your room and then someone cam after you so you turned and saw a maid her name is Angel " Do you want me to put your stuff in your closet ?" She asked " yes plz I am soo tired !" Angel was like your sister she wasn't so old she was 20 years old so you always call her unni. Then you went down you were so hungry ! I made a sandwich then I saw my grandma sitting on the couch and I asked witch school was I going to attend she answerd

*the next day *
"______-ah wwack up!" A maid said " why!" "You have school" " oh ya its minday omo i realy hat mondays !!" "C' m on your already late its 8:00 school starts at 8:10 " " omo!!!!!!" You said whil junmping out of bed you put on your uniform after tacking a shower and brushing your theeth you went out and saw your driver you went in the car and when you arrived at school it was 8:30 . Then you saw a girl she loked like looking for somoen after she saw you she started walcking toward you then she stooped " hey ! Are you ______?" " yes hiw did you know ?" " oh it is because i never saw you here .." " ah ok by the way what s your name?" " ohh i am Ji won ! Parj Ji Won !"

Notes

Hop you liked it maybe you won't like the beginning but then after I think the 5 or 6 th chap it will be Waw so plz subscribe and vote an comment Thx ask me if you want me to read your fanfiction anyway this is not my first ( I had in aeither site).

Comments

It's ok but you will wright again right?

got7jbforever22 got7jbforever22
5/27/14

Nice Story! make more...by the way, It's Woochanglee who made "What was Luck" sorry to say this, I deleted my story because I realized that I should improve more, I will remake it...and my teacher told me to delete it because my grammar was wrong. Thank you for the good comments in my story, please don't hate me :)) I'm just going to make it again and improve more, I'll be back when I'm done editing my story, I won't let everyone down! Thank You :))

Woo-changlee Woo-changlee
5/27/14

@markgot7lover
Thx ♥

got7jbforever22 got7jbforever22
4/27/14

waw nice story ! keep it up unni ♥ fighting

markgot7lover markgot7lover
4/27/14

@dominicho12
If there anything you can't undersand just ask me tell me where it is that is all!

got7jbforever22 got7jbforever22
4/20/14