the misstirious game - Comments

It's ok but you will wright again right?

Nice Story! make more...by the way, It's Woochanglee who made "What was Luck" sorry to say this, I deleted my story because I realized that I should improve more, I will remake it...and my teacher told me to delete it because my grammar was wrong. Thank you for the good comments in my story, please don't hate me :)) I'm just going to make it again and improve more, I'll be back when I'm done editing my story, I won't let everyone down! Thank You :))

@markgot7lover
Thx ♥

waw nice story ! keep it up unni ♥ fighting

@dominicho12
If there anything you can't undersand just ask me tell me where it is that is all!

Nice story. But could you please check your paragraph. I was lost reading it sorry.

@AmyWtsn
Ahh sorry I meant to right gona it's because my autocorect is French and I am using my phone so it's a bit hard checking from my phone

Also, I think your title should be "The Mysterious Game".
I hope that helps some. Keep up the good work! I subscribed, so I can't wait for the next update.

@got7jbforever22

You do know that "gonads" is a term for reproductive organs right? As in, another term a testicle or an ovary. Judging by the context you're using it, I think you're looking for the word "going" or even "going to". It's used to describe a situation in which you are trying to make progress.

@Dreamy Afink
Yeah but it was because no oen liked it but I promissory you pepole will love this oen but I only need help like pepoleave telling other that this story is nice but I am so sorry

hihi what happen to the other story? it's a great story too. :(

@soka Queen's
I am gonads update now

@soka Queen's
Oh realyyyyyyy thx can you tell pepol about my story ..

hwaiting i'll wait ur update ^^