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the misstirious game

the magical world

"Oh sorry I didn't interdouse myself I am Ji won Park Ji won""oh nice to meet you " " you to " you went to class first period was good then the bell rang you wanted to leave to your second class so you packed your stuff and went to Ji won so you can leave."hey aren't we going to our next class ?" " oh ! Right, I forget to tell you we stay at the same class the teachers are the one who cames "realyyyyyyy !! Nice I am to lazy to move " the teacher cam in after 2nd period was a small break from 15 to 20 minute. Ji won cam to me and gave me a iPad "why?" "Oh its from the school " " why? " " i dont know i never asked " "why " you respected jokingly "because I don't want to" "why ?" " because I am to lazy to !" " wh- no I am just joking " phew good all the class was playing a gam together in the iPad just right your name and start !" "Alright " then you all started playing people where losing fast at the ending there was only you a girl called Suzy and a guy called jb then Suzy lost the bell rabid then teacher cam in jb didn't stop playing but you wanted to study so you wanted to finish it fast so you tried to play and listin to the teacher butcher you lost it was the first time.. . Every.... in your life you couldn't believe it you look at jb with glaring he just smirks then he wentbout of the class you called him and said " your gona see I am gonads win next time !!" He just walked iuld of class the teacher didn't mind after 3rd class ended the other teacher cam in while saying " oh no this time I won't let you go oh no no no !" You didn't understand what he meant then his phone rang so he went to pick it up So hrs had to turn you closed your eyes for a second then you opend it and saw no Oen except the teacher then Ji won grabbed you outside then she said "follow me !" Then she started running she was fast you cold barely reach her then you saw her get in a room so you followed her in when you got in you saw 3 tv and 1xbox 1wii 1 playstation4 and 10 computers and the room was full of junk food ! But no one was there then you saw Ji won getting in a small hole in the room you entered behind her but when you got in the hole place was numbers 10639519301710109901836601

Notes

Ahh where is she ? Guess ! Plz read my story and the and sorry fir the wrong stuff

Comments

It's ok but you will wright again right?

got7jbforever22 got7jbforever22
5/27/14

Nice Story! make more...by the way, It's Woochanglee who made "What was Luck" sorry to say this, I deleted my story because I realized that I should improve more, I will remake it...and my teacher told me to delete it because my grammar was wrong. Thank you for the good comments in my story, please don't hate me :)) I'm just going to make it again and improve more, I'll be back when I'm done editing my story, I won't let everyone down! Thank You :))

Woo-changlee Woo-changlee
5/27/14

@markgot7lover
Thx ♥

got7jbforever22 got7jbforever22
4/27/14

waw nice story ! keep it up unni ♥ fighting

markgot7lover markgot7lover
4/27/14

@dominicho12
If there anything you can't undersand just ask me tell me where it is that is all!

got7jbforever22 got7jbforever22
4/20/14