Broken Hearts and Crystal Tears - Comments, page 7

@Exo_overdosechoc
it's my job as a critic :3

@fluffysehunexo
:3 i was bored and didnt want to do my ss hw
i mean seriously who cares about ibn buttootie
it's not like i ever read the articles anyway they never help me

@fluffysehunexo
:3 i was bored and didnt want to do my ss hw
i mean seriously who cares about ibn buttootie
it's not like i ever read the articles anyway they never help me

also muhan forced me to write this cuz she gave me skittles
and iris claimed that it was bad publicity

lol i was actually just teasing muhan i only meant half of what i wrote
i mean the plot still seems cliche, boring, and the whole story progresses at a repulsively fast rate
but i can't really say anything about character because i don't like exo (with the connotation that i just don't obsess over it, as i have way too much other stuff to obsess over (liek doctor who) and partly also because im a guy--sidney is a pen name)
moderately developed voice, it's not too bad
and yes, muhan, you can post that thing i said to you in school

Omg, im laughing so hard, well not really but my insides are. Even though im pretty sure we are in the same grade, tho im not positive, I only understood like a bit more than half of what "Sidney" said. To much big and fancy words like what exo_overdosechoc exit. I mean I get what ur saying, but too many big words I think I will never remember. Besides, this story is very interesting and amusing. It also has many twists in story plots that captures the readers heart.. Lol, I rarely say that much

♥

Too many fancy words....please refrain from using fancy thoughts "Sidney"

@sidney weng
Sigh Simon I know it's you :P
Be nice my feelings are hurt lol

I find the plot very cliche and lackluster, barely any character development and the characterization through dialogue is so atrocious. A complete cacophony of incomplete ideas and plot holes, barely no use of symbols or metaphors. I find the characters are often out of character as well. Your word choice does not at all reflect the tone that you want to create.

pretty good for someone with ms. elzea though

@LuluH
We'll be updating tonight!!!
And then school will come ;_;

@fluffysehunexo
Thank you. I hope so, but if a sad ending is coming it would be okay because it suits the story well. The think that is making me so obsessed with it is the thriller, because I never know what could possibly come next! Something sad, or something happy. Update soon please! ^^ Saranghae! ♥♪

@exo-weare-one
DON'T SCARE CHILDREN LIKE THIS
@LuluH
THE ENDING WILL BE HAPPY
LOL

@LuluH
Thank you so much for the support! I'll just promise you one thing: the ending will (hopefully) be happy!

Now I am confused ;_; I don't know what to think

Well, I don't know what would be better for the next chapter: a little bit of drama from Minnie and Summer to see each other in her date or a little fun from Kai and Sehun when they realise they thought exactly the same for the date xD Still, Im looking forward to it! Fighting! ♥

@LuluH
It won't be sad aww :D
We should be updating tonight!
:)
Don't cry...even though that is our purpose...heh...

Don't worry, you can spoil. I'll prefer it so I can be ready for what's coming and don't have to cry like a baby if something too sad happens :'c

@LuluH
Hahaha we were both happy too ;'D
Next chapter's going to be
interesting...
I'll try not to spoil xD

A block? Oh, so that explains the overload of happiness in the last chapter ^^