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Broken Hearts and Crystal Tears - Comments, page 6
Wait what. I know this is a fanfic but but KAI!! OPPA COME BACK. (I bet he will come back to lIfe. ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ~)
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@fluffysehunexo
omg im kidding about most of it lol
your OC could also be more developed it doesn't feel like the writer knows the OC well enough it feels like the author is unsure about the existance FOR GODS SAKE YOU CREATED THE CHARACTER YOU KNOW HER BEST
btw the plot is still blasphemous
@sidney weng
Wow Simon r00d we spent TIME and EFFORT do you know how much I like to waste my time and not use any effort lol
lol i'm the one responsible for convincing muhan and iris to kill kai >:)
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