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Ever More

Summary

Maranda lives in the forest with her best friend Kat who is mates to an alpha werewolf. Him and his pack live in the mansion with Kat while Maranda resides in the small shack next to it. Until one day a rogue shows up changing their "normal" life upside down.

Characters

Kat

Kat

Lives in the forest on her family's property with her best friend Maranda, mate Kris, and his pack.

Maranda

Maranda

Lives in the forest with her best friend Kat, her mate Kris, and his pack. Other best friend Luhan.

Chapters

Comments

Seriously, I adore this story.
Chapter 7 ended on such a cliff-hanger!! XDD

winteryEthereal winteryEthereal
7/6/17

wHAT, HE LEFT?!
OK, I usually don't read werewolf AUs, in fact I detest them with a passion because they're done horribly wrong way too often. However, this isn't half bad, I'm enjoying it, oddly enough. I have found numerous grammatical errors, but the general plot and fluency is respectable. ^w^ I'd give this a 7/10 because of fluency and the presence of realistic character actions and reactions, but it's missing one point for grammar, one point for the feeling of the story being rushed, and a third point for the very sudden sex scene. I'm not complaining, it was done well, but again, there was no substantial buildup to it. I don't mean for you to change your writing style drastically, but adopting a few new techniques would improve this story a lot!
I anticipate the next chapter!
-Faith/WE

winteryEthereal winteryEthereal
6/10/17
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