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An Athlete's Miracle

The Date (Part 2(carnival))

Luhans pov

awe my baby’s so cute the way shes surprised and happy that i remember the little details she tells me, but its my job as her boyfriend to remember.

you pov

My stomach is feeling major butterflies and I can’t seem stop smiling and being thankful for the wonderful boyfriend i have looking at him as we are entering the theme park.
when we arrive it already 3, if getting a bit warm since its a sunny day out.
(y/n), gaja, lets get your favorite treat, ice cream!
awe the way luhan-oppa said ice cream really makes me think his still a child at heart, even more so now that were at the theme park.
ne, oppa thats sounds good lets go.
Luhan gets himself mint icecream and me (your fav. icecream).
komawo oppa.
anyhting for you babe, he says and kisses my forhead, and we begin to eat.
after many spoonfuls of eating and feeding eachother,
Luhan asks “where do you want to go first?

O.o

ummm, i dont know oppa…
araresso, well finish eating the icecream first do it doesnt melt and then well decide, araresso?
ne oppa.

I dont know how but Luhan-oppa was able to convince me to go with him first into the horror house.
at a moment like this i kinda miss my best friend panda tao to save me from coming in here.
we can hear screams up ahead and i cant help grip tighter to luhan-oppa hand and the sleeve of his jacket.
as we turn the corner, a scary clown with a knife comes out, i immediately scream and him my face into luhan chest, i can feel him wrap his arms around me and whisper "its ok im right here with you." it takes a moment for me to catch my breath and we continue you on.
did i ever mention i am seriously terrified of clowns?
now where walking through a tunnel of glass and mirror walls, and i can just feel it in my gut something is going to go wrong. just right before we get out of the tunnel,
on luhans side a glass wall lights with a monster holding a head, it reaches for him and he lets out a scream!
he takes my hand and pulls me away
i cant help but laugh
what?
nothing oppa i say laughing
then why are you laughing? he says while clunching his chest
well oppa i just never thought you could scream in such a high voice that all, i really cant breathe remembering his voice and face expressiony
ahhh dont laugh.
mian oppa ok ill stop
after what feels like a lifetime and many more clowns/ghosts and mine and luhans screams, the horror house finally ends.
well that was something that i was not expecting
ne me too oppa, but i think i faced my fear
what!
i dont think im afraid of clowns anymore because you helped me face my fear because you were with me.
we spend the rest of the day going from ride to ride like, 3 small roller coasters, tunnel of love, tilt-a-whirl, swings and river caves. it is now 6
oppa?
ne (y/n)?
can we go we go on the ferris wheel, the suns going down the city is lighting up i think ill look pretty.
he doesnt answer, instead he just stands in silence
oppa?
huh? ohh ahh yeah if you really want to, lets go.
really? komawo oppa.
while we wait in line, luhan is back hugging my tightly with his hands securely around my waist and with my head resting against his chest, I feel safe and protected like this
when were on, i notice that luhan continues to hold me close and wont look up and if he does it to face the sky.when we get get to the top, i cant feel luhan holding my hand tightly
oppa! look how pretty everything looks
ne yeah it is, i am to fascinated to notice that luhan beside me isnt looking but instead is frozen stiff. his breathing is a bit irregular.
oppa lets take a selca!
when my eyes and his meets, he relaxes a little bit more,
ne, give me your camera and ill take it ok, 1,2,3, he turns and kisses me on my cheek and “click”
here, he says but doesnt take his eyes off of me, i look at the picture and it came out really nice.
the ferris wheel started to move again to lower us down, once it started to jerk, luhan grabbed my hand and held it tight and i squeezed back and smiled at him.
Its gotten cold and i for got a coat besides my jean cover up
crap…. the wind is starting to effect me, its getting really cold….
as we get ready to leave i feel, something being draped over my shoulders, I look back to see luhan-oppa giving me his jacket
oppa… i begin to protest but luhan stops me with a kiss,
its getting cold babe, you need the jacket more then i do
araresso, komawo oppa.
(y/n)?
yes oppa?do you want to go my house with the guys, im sure they’ll be happy to see you especially toa, kai and sehun.
jinjia? i would love to oppa.when were inside his house, all 11 oppas are there.
Annyeonghaseyo oppas, i bow as i come in with luhan next to me.
Annyeonghaseyo guys
Luhan and (y/n) annyeonghaseyo everyone says
ahhh (y/n) and luhan shipper feels yells chen-oppa
yah chen, enough! you have been going on about your dedication to (y/n) and luhan ships. enough already unless you wanna die says an irrataed baekhyun-oppa,
stop hiding it we all you secretly ship then too but you just wont admit it, your as crazy about them as i am.
yah chen!! baekhyun, throws a pillow across the room and “smack” right into chens face.
hyung chen whines
enough alrighty you guys act to much like kids kris-oppa walks into the room
oh hey there hyung and (y/n)
at that moments kai and sehun jump over over a table to get to me and luhan
yahh what are you guys monkeys? why are you hanging and jumping over the furnurature luhan yells.
i giggle its funny to see him irrated with his dongsaengs.
tao then jumps up making room on the coach yelling “no, hyung we are wolves, but im the only panda wolf here. but there are no monkeys.”
as we are lead over to the couch my kai and sehun, luhan is giving tao a dead glare.tao, kai and sehun are both sitting in front of us now
so how did the date go hyung and (y/n) they ask symetrically.
hey, before you start asking questions and asnwering them you might want to wait for chen to get out of the comfort room to listen too Chanyeol says
oh yes please do, he has been going on about you all day, lets not depress him because he missed this DO says
wait!! what!! you guys dont want to know luhans whos my dongsaeng but your guys hyung date went!!! Xiumin asked
its really quite, and their all looking back and forth at eachother,
Ill go get chen yells chanyeol with a wide grin, soon everyone is sitting in front of us.
so how did you like the surprise at the park (y/n) sehun asks
I was truly touched by it, it was amazing,i loved how it symbolically looked like where we had our first kiss.
ohh tmi (y/n) kris snickers
ahh hyung are you jealous lay says playfully
yahh no! kris getting red
shhhh what happened next chen says excitedly
hyung were did you take her next DO asks
ohh, i took her to a carnival theme park since she had never been there.
woohh, he remembered that you told him that (y/n) thats incrediable, since he cant remember me ever telling him anything kai says.
(in the background…. chen is yelling “(y/n) and luhan shipping feels are to much till baehyun goes over to quiet him)
what ride did you do first there (y/n) tao ask
haha, well i dont think youll like it tao, but it wasnt a ride either, it was…
yahh (y/n) dont tell them we went there luhan quickly says
(in the background still with chen, baekhyun asks “why cant see tell us? hyung what secret are you tryign to hide? were you on your vest behavior i hope!”
yes please tell me tao insists while doing aegyo
luhan sighs in defeat
we went to a horror house tao
*gasp* were you ok (y/n) tao asks concerningly,
haha well i was scared because there were clowns,
were there ghosts (y/n)
ne, there was tao
*gasp gain* hyung! how could you take (y/n) to a place with ghost and clowns!!!
ow!
i turn to see that Xiumin has hit luhan,
“luhan you dont take a girl, especially on a date into a horror house, what is wrong with you…”
anni, its ok luhan-oppa helped me get over my fear of clowns plus as a bonus i heard him scream when he was scared.
wow hyung nice going letting your girlfriend hear you scream kris says teasiling, while lay and suho are dying of laughter right next to him
yeah hyung real manly sehun says snickering give high fives to kai and chanyeol.
I look over to see luhan is red as a tomato
(y/n) what was you favorite part of tonight? asked kai
ahhh.. mmmm.. oh it was getting on the ferris wheel with luhan-oppa.
WHAT!!!
everyones head snaps and looks at my with huge unbelieveable eyes
Luhan went on the ferris wheel with you?
ne, whats so surprising about that?everyones quiet adn looking at luhan-oppa i look over and hes looking at his lap fegitting with his fingers.
(y/n) were going to need proof of this they all say in union
ne, i take out my phone and show them our picture.
woohh hyung you actually went on tao says astonished
,sehun just gives luhan a hug
hyung you can have your manlyness back kai says and then each and everyone goes over to clasp his shoulders or to pat it
wait, why is it shocking that he went on the ferris wheel with me? i ask still quite confused
waaah, (y/n) you dont know baekhyun asks me
anni
Luhan is afraid of heights they all say in union

Luhans pov

I can feel her looking at me, but i dont want her to think that she dragged me up there, i wanted to go up there with her.she is the only that clears away all my fears, thats why i could go up there, it was because she was by my side.

you pov

I look to luhan his still looking down
oppa is that true?
ne it iswhy didnt you tell me we didnt have to go on it
but it was because you wanted too, and i didnt want to disappoint you
and thats when i remember his closeness to me, not looking down and squeezing my hand, but yet he did all that for me..my eyes are moist and i dont notice a tear slipped till luhan wipes it for me asking
“why are you crying?”
because oppa, today you did everything for me that would make me smile, im just really happen and thankful so i cant stop the tears now.
shhh he says holding me
it ok because just like, having you by my side i can face my fears too
its getting hot, so i wiggle from his hug to get air but i smile to him and he kisses my forhead.
AWE!!!!
opps i forgot we had an audience.
have you guys eaten? suho asks
anni we havent
DO just finish making food, eat some suho says.
as luhan asd i walk to the dinning table my coughing fit begins…
ohhh noooo………….
gwaenchanh-ayo babe? luhan-oppa asks me, i manage to smile.we sit down next to eachother and everyone begins to claim their seatanother cough fit happens…
not im not just hot but i have cold shivers please not right now, why must my body be so weak? I was only exposed to a little wind…appa adn omma will not be happy, neither will Oppa-minho.
gwaenchanh-ayo, luhan asks with a voice full of concern
ne, oppa im just going to get water, but as get up my legs feel like noodles and fall.
Luhan catches me before i hit the ground but im really now im really cold and hot.
Aishh, (y/n) your burning hot, why did you tell me you were ok when you have a fever?
should we take her home DO asks
no shell stay in my room luhan responds
wooo, hyung dont do anything,
aish shut up baekhyun, im not like thatIl
l go to the store to get medicine suho says, araresso but wait for me to go with you
kai go get me a wet clothe first.
im still in luhans arms and his warmth is comforting, he carries my to his bed and tucks me in.kai comes in with the towel giving it to luhan and leaving. he dabs in first on my head, i flinch at first but it begins to feel nice.
aishh (y/n) wae! you didnt feel good but you lied and said you were fine. his voice is full of worry a bit of anger.
mian, oppa
he sighs, just promise you wont do it
againararesso oppa, i wont
lay-oppa walks in to check up on us, suho says to hurry(y/n) ill be back, when he begins to walk away i reach out and catch his arm
anni oppa stay with me please, he looks back and smiles araresso,
lay,
yeah hyung (who is still at the door)
go with suho please and then call Minho to tell him (y/n) is going to stay with us.
ne hyung.

komawo oppa.
for what?
for staying my side, i say sleepingly
before i fall asleep, i hear him say
“I will always be by your side, i promise i wont go anywhere.”

Notes

I hope you like the update.
if its a bit dull im sorry, school has been not helpful so my ideas arent all the exciting.

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