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An Athlete's Miracle

The Date (Part 1)

****8 months have passed****

authors pov

you've been in a official relationship with Luhan for 7 months.
you took a month hanging as “friends” to get to know each other. you're in a much happier state of your life with luhan, despite your condition.because of luhan, you have opened up a lot more and now love to take risks and try new and/or daring things.
your condition your doctor informs you that its gotten a little better where you dont need pills to help you breathe. Small stepping progress.
you and jimin are on good terms, he accepts your relationship with luhan and is a great friend to both of you.

your pov

I wake up to the sounds of knocking on my door… “knock. knock”
I look at the time, Its freakin 8:30am on a saturday morning!!!
wae! i say sleepily and a bit annoyed
(y/n)-ah, someone is here to see you.It Minho-oppa on the otherside of my door and i can hear a hint of sleepiness in his voice too
what? a visitor?
Oppa, who is it?
he sticks his head in, just holding the door open just a crack.his face is droopy and he talks with half his eyes open
why dont you get up and ready then come down to see who it is ok?
ne oppa,
ok well im going back to bed, but have fun.
fun? what is fun anout waking up at 8:30 on a saturday?
i sigh and get up, and freshen up, I put my hair in a messy bun and throw on something casual.
I decide to go with grey sweatpants and a large coral sweater.I walk down stairs, cranky and tired but as i turn down the stairs, I no longer feel angry but im excited instead
Oppa! i yell
Luhan looks up as me and smiles
Awe (y/n), you look so adorable! I can i kidnap you because of your cuteness?
yahh Oppa dont play like that I say as i playfully punch his arm
araresso, i got it he chuckles.
wae, oppa are you here at my house so early i pout because i still want to sleep.
aishh your so cute (y/n), but i came here today to ask you out on a date since today we will be celebrating 7 months together.
i dont know why, but this brings tears to my eyes.how sweet, that he remembers our anniversary but also wants to do something special.
ne, but what will we do oppa?
bimil(ita a secret) he says and smiles.
Oppa! i pout
wae! i promise you’ll like it, hurry and get ready ans well go..
Araresso oppa, i sigh but inwardly im excited to see what he has planned.
when i look into my closet, i find a white flowy dress and put it on with a light jean jacket.I find a matching hair bow and pin my hair back with the bow sitting center of my head.I throw on flats and go down stairs.
when i get down stair minho-oppa is standing next to luhan and their laughing.
minho-oppa looks up “wow, (y/n)-ahh you look beautiful”
gamsahabnida oppa
when luhan sees me, his eyes widen and his mouth forms an “o”“(y/n) you do look really beautiful he says.. and i can see that his blushing
“ahh, well have fun, but take care of my sister Luhan-hyung,, or i will hurt you. Minho-oppa says jokingly at luhan
“yahhh! it that how you talk to your Hyung! aishh, but araresso, i got it. luhan says with a smirk
Minho-oppa walks up to me and gives me a hug saying “have fun and be careful,
Ne, oppa i will, but you dont have to worry luhan-oppa is with me
Ne, i know he says and we leave.
Oppa, seriously where are we going? i say pouting
ahh, so impatient we are today, he says as he grabs my hand.
anni! im just curious i whisper.
Luhan opens the car door and i get in,when he gets in he looks over at me and says “I promise youll like it, just hang tight for the ride” he leans over and kisses my forhead
araresso oppa. we drive for a couple of miles and luhan suddenly stops.
what wrong oppa?
nothing, but remeber its a surprisehe pulls something out of his pocket, its a blindfold
do you trust me (y/n) he askes me
ne i do oppa
ok then put this on, and ill continue to drive to our destination.
araresso, im a little anxiety, but luhan helps me put it on
we drive for a little while longer when we stop again.
I can hear luhan get out of the car, and my door opening.
(y/n) let me see your handI give him my hand and he helps me out of the car.
now on a count of 3 you can take off the blind fold
1…..
Im getting nervous the longer i have to wait.
2……….
now im holding on to the bottom of jean jacket and shifting from foot to foot
3.
i remove the blindfold, a smiling luhan now stands in front of me and i gasp at the scenery.

Luhan pov
(the night before)


man im nervous…. should i do it…. what if i sound stupid….
aishhh me and (y/n) will have been dating 7 months tomorrow but why do i still get nervous?
**picks up phone and dials number**
anyoung haseyo? his voice booms over the speaker
ahh, minho its luhan-hyung
oh, whats up hyung?
ahh, minho is it alright if i take (y/n) out on a date tomorrow its our anniversary i want to surprise her.
ne, thats fine, I think its sweet and cute that you remember and what to do that for her.......

Hyung?
ne, minho
thank you
for what?
finding and coming into my sisters life
anni thank you for having a little sister.
haha, what time will you be here tomorrow?
oh, im thinking 8:20-8:30?
wahh, so early araresso.
thank you minho
no problem hyung see you tomorrow.
i arrive at 8:22 am
From: Luhan-hyung
minho im outside.. can you come to the door? wait are you even up?

5 mins later
From: Minho
Im up now, ill be right there.
the door opens to reveal a very sleepy minho
ahh, sorry hyung its still early for me
i cant help to laugh its ok (y/n)-ah isnt up either ill go and wake her
araresso.
.
.
.
.
Im waiting down stairs when an excited voice yells Oppa!
I looks up and smiles when i see her
Awe (y/n), you look so adorable! I can i kidnap you because of your cuteness?
yahh Oppa dont play like that she say and playfully punch my arm
araresso, i got it i laugh as her adorablness.
wae, oppa are you here at my house so early she pout cutely.
I can tell i disturbed her sleep
aishh your so cute (y/n), but i came here today to ask you out on a date since today we will be celebrating 7 months together.
on hearing this she tears in her eyes.
ne, but what will we do oppa? she says blinking away the tears
bimil(ita a secret) i teaseling tell her and smile.
Oppa! she pouts
gosh she’s sooo cute, i cant stand it.
wae! i promise you’ll like it, hurry and get ready and we’ll go..
Araresso oppa, she then disappears upstairs.
Minho then appears again, this time less sleepy
did you tell her where your going or what you plan to do?
no i didnt i want to surprise her and see her expression i say unable to hid my smile and excitment
ahh, ok he says laughing then minho looks up “wow, (y/n)-ahh you look beautiful”
gamsahabnida oppa
When i see (y/n), my eyes widen and my mouth drops. I suddenly cant do anything but just look at her“(y/n) you do look really beautiful my cheeks get warm as i compliment her.
“ahh, well have fun, but take care of my sister Luhan-hyung,, or i will hurt you. Minho says jokingly.
“yahhh! it that how you talk to your Hyung! aishh,..... araresso, i got it. i says with a smirk
Minho-oppa walks up and gives (y/n) a hug saying “have fun and be careful,
Ne, oppa i will, but you dont have to worry luhan-oppa is with me
Ne, i know he says and we leave.
Oppa, seriously where are we going? i say pouting
ahh, so impatient we are today, i says as i grabs her hand.but i love this, shes so cute and im happy to know its drives her nuts not knowing
anni! im just curious i her whisper, and i cant help but smilei help her in adn once im in i look over at and says “I promise youll like it, just hang tight for the ride” I lean over to kiss her forhead
araresso oppa. we drive for a couple of miles and i suddenly remember i havent blindfold her yet so i stop.
what wrong oppa?nothing, but remeber its a surpriseI pull out a blindfold
do you trust me i ask
ne i do oppa
ok then put this on, and ill continue to drive to our destination.araresso, and i help her put it on
i drive till we reach your destination.i get out of the car and go to (y/n)’s side to help her.
(y/n) let me see your hand
she gives me her hand and i help her out.now on a count of 3 you can take off the blind fold
1…..
she gets a little stiff.
2……….
i can tell shes nervous, shes holding tightly to her jacket and shifting feet
3.

she removes the blindfold, and i cant help but stand infront of her smiling.I hear her gasp.

the scenery is a beautiful park with a picnic set out for two there a decorated walkway to the picnic.and, trees with lazy swing branches in the wind, a little river in the back.i wanted to reinvent the day we shared our first kiss, just this time with a picnic

oppa…. she says
she comes over and hugs me giving me a peck on the lips
Its beautiful oppa, I love it!
I was hoping you would….. are you hungry?
starving oppa she says laughing
when were done eating its roughly around 12

your pov

the scenery is a beautiful park with a picnic set out for two there a decorated walkway to the picnic. theres a ribbon place across the walkway, written on it was “Happy Anniversary” and, trees with lazy swing branches in the wind, a little river in the back.

i wanted to reinvent the day we shared our first kiss, just this time with a picnic, luhan says with a shy smile

oppa…. i says
i go and hug him giving him a peck on the lips.
Its beautiful oppa, I love it!
I truly am touched by his actions, i every lucky for luhan-oppa.
after we finish luhan say “(y/n) i want take you somewhere fun, lets go?
I can hint excitement in his voice and eyes. gosh times like this his such a little kid
ne, gaja oppa
chinja(really)? araresso gaja(lets go).
we arrive to a carnival theme park
oppa…remember you said you want us to come here together since youve never been before
how lucky am i? all day luhan has been amazing especially the things he remebers and i get tearied eye

------flashback---------------------------------------------------------------------------------

(y/n) what is something you want to do that youve never done?
hmmmm………… oh i want to go to a carinval theme park, ive never been to one.
chinja? Wae!?
*facepalm* aishh, (y/n) you havent told luhan about your condition, what excuse will you give him?ahhh, my parents were always to busy and it wasnt that important i guesswoo nice save…
ahhh, then next time well go together ok (y/n)?
chinja oppa?
ne, and well try everything, you have to worry.
ne oppa, and i wont worry because i know youll be next to me
gamsahabnida oppa

-----end of flashback-------------------------------------------------------------------

you remember that too oppa i say nearly crying
ne, of course i looked forward going with you gaja
ne oppa

Notes

I hope you like part 1 of chapter 5, i will try to update part 2 soon.

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