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If tomorrow I should fall...

Alternate Ending (Your Death)

Your Point of View

“dangsin-eun dangsin-i maj-ji anhneun won-in-i nal su issseubnida algo issseubnida. (You know it has to be me because you won't fit.)” You laugh and punched his arm.

“geuleon da-eum seodulleo geulaeseo uli ga gyeolhon hal su gaja! (Then hurry and go so we can get married!)” Tao smiled and kiss you.

“naneun geugeos-eul gajigo ... ( I got it…) “ you replied

To be very honest you were scared to go up alone. But for both your sakes you climbed up and Tao helped you out. You turned unease and looked at him… You then started to run and look for help.

As you ran you looked around and saw many people dead and building toppled. It was like a scene out of a war movie… only that it was real. The air was thick and no shine shined anymore. You ran further and further looking for help.

“dowajuseyo!!! (Help!!!)” You scream

“salam-i juwie ? (is anyone around?)” You yell running out of breath

You collapse exhausted and you hear foot stepping coming toward you. You look up and crews of military personnel run over. They put and breathing masks around you and try to help you up to leave.

“ani ! ani ! ani ! jamkkan! daleun salam-i issda! nal gaja ! (No! No! No! Wait! There's someone else! Let Go of me!)” You yell struggling to break free.

You lead them back to the site where you and Tao where initially trapped. As you got closer you see Tao face through the opening. The military men all run over and lift open the collapse ceiling as Tao climbed out. You run over and embrace each other. The military team then signal for you all to move out. As you and Tao walked hand in hand, you smiled looking at each other.

Then you felt it again just like before… no BIGGER… the ground shakes … a building ahead of us began to topple. And piece fell like meteors from the sky… Tao held your hand tightly and ran with you. Large pieces from the building fell and tumble. The military men who came to help you all yelled as one by one they were crushed before your eyes.

Tao hand tremble as he gripped your hand and ran.

Tao’s POV

“Oppa! museowoyo . (I'm scared.)” (your name here) yelled at me

“gwaenchanh-a . ulineun gwaenchanh-eulgeoya . (It's okay. We'll be okay.)” I said to ease (Your name here) while not looking back holding her hand running.

Just then (your name here)’s hand slipped. She tripped. I turned but ash cover the air. Just then I felt hands on my back… “naneun dangsin-eul salanghabnida ... (I love you…)” I heard her voice as her hands pushed me, a large piece of the building fell and crushed her.

Time seem to have stood still as I looked at her… laying lifeless under a huge boulder. Her legs were completely crushed and torn off her to her knees.

My eyes blurred with tears and I picked her up and ran crying. The earthquake finally passed and the sky cleared up… I looked at (your name here) not breathing… blood had stopped dripping from her torn leg… my tears though wouldn’t keep falling…

I walked with her lifeless body for hours… finally I reach the port by the ocean.

“ulineun yeogi ... (We're here...)” I smiled and looked at her

Fin...

Notes

Comments

@N_mi
Lol thanks I'm glad you liked it :) my first sad fanfic lol

Iva-chan Iva-chan
3/26/15

DAEBAK DAEBAK DAEBAK!!!!!!!!!!!
total emotional breakdown at the end where TAO lives and YOU dies.....

N_miSone N_miSone
3/26/15

@Iva-chan
Yeah, but it's still so sad! I hope (and it's very possible it won't happen) that there won't be any earthquakes near me anytime soon. -.- I wouldn't want one of my loved ones dying like those two... :(

macoco10 macoco10
3/17/15

@macoco10
Thanks, my computer was out lol. Its sad but its supposed to be a tragedy lol :')

Iva-chan Iva-chan
3/17/15

I'm happy you didn't just put one ending, and that you did a triple update, though both endings are sad... :'(

macoco10 macoco10
3/17/15