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If tomorrow I should fall...

Alternate Ending (Tao's Death)

Your Point of view

After thinking about it… you felt it was best for you to go out and get help… you knew that Tao wouldn't fit through that space anyways…

“Oppa, naneun dol-aol geos-ida. (I'll be back.)” You smiled and kiss him once more and climb out of the tiny space.

As you reach the surface, you cough and cough. Building around you were destroyed, wreckage was everywhere and not a soul in sight.

Frantic you being to run around and yelled for help.

“dowajuseyo!!! (Help!!!)” You scream

“salam-i juwie ? (is anyone around?)” you yell running out of breath

You stop and coughed, just then you hear yelling and someone running towards you. You look up and crews of military personnel run over. They put and breathing mask around you and try to help you up to leave.

“ani ! ani ! ani ! jamkkan! daleun salam-i issda! nal gaja ! (No! No! No! Wait! There's someone else! Let Go of me!)” You yell struggling to break free.

You lead them back to the site where you and Tao where initially trapped. As you got closer you see Tao face through the opening. As you were about to run over…. Suddenly the earth began to shake again. Your heart drops you run closer to Tao and reach out. But the military personnel pull you back…

“OPPA!!! OPPA!!!” You yell as you watch the crake crumble and Tao’s face disappear of your sight…

Something hits your head and you faint blacking out.

You stir awake as you hear something. You open your eyes as a light shines in. You rub your eyes but your hand could barely move.

“(Your name)!” Your mother yelled she was sleeping next to you

“naneun eodi? (where am I?)” you ask

“byeong-won (Hospital)” your mother cried and held your hand

You looked at your hand and saw the ring Tao gave you… TAO! You thought and jolted

“Undo editsdangsin-ui aju yaghan jigeum ... idonghaji anhseubnida . ije ilju-il jeongdo jago iss-eoss-eoyo. (don't move... your very weak right now. You've been sleeping for about a week now.)” Your mother tries to calm you down.

Her words scared you… a week…. What happened in a week…!!!!

“eomeoni ! eomeoni ... geuneun eodi issji? eodi ? ulineun gyeolhon hae . geuneun gwaenchanh-a , an geulae ? (Mother! Mother... where is he? Where is he? we're getting married. He's okay isn't he?)” you exclaim hold your mother arms

“geugeos-eun salamdeul-egeneun deo isang ... yeogi e daehae yaegi haji ... johseubnida ... (It's best... not to talk about... who people no longer here...)” She says softly to you

No… longer… here… those words stab you a million knives… you laugh, as your mother looks concern… unbelievable…. Tao can’t be dead… you where there… you went to get help… you cry loud as your mother holds you tightly…

That night as you mother fell asleep at your bedside… you slowly walk down the hall and up the stairs. Finally you reach the roof… the wind blew strong and your hair danced in the wind…

You walked closer to the edge of the building… thinking to yourself…

A world without Tao… it a world not worth living in…

“Oppa… gidalyeo . naega ganda ... (wait for me. I'm coming...)” You smile…

FIN...

Notes

Comments

@N_mi
Lol thanks I'm glad you liked it :) my first sad fanfic lol

Iva-chan Iva-chan
3/26/15

DAEBAK DAEBAK DAEBAK!!!!!!!!!!!
total emotional breakdown at the end where TAO lives and YOU dies.....

N_miSone N_miSone
3/26/15

@Iva-chan
Yeah, but it's still so sad! I hope (and it's very possible it won't happen) that there won't be any earthquakes near me anytime soon. -.- I wouldn't want one of my loved ones dying like those two... :(

macoco10 macoco10
3/17/15

@macoco10
Thanks, my computer was out lol. Its sad but its supposed to be a tragedy lol :')

Iva-chan Iva-chan
3/17/15

I'm happy you didn't just put one ending, and that you did a triple update, though both endings are sad... :'(

macoco10 macoco10
3/17/15