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He's bad but good !

25th chapter

Duri POV
"It should've been me.It really should have been me."I hear Leeteuk's voice trembling and cracking silently coming from some direction in this dark.I can't feel.I can't anything.Just hear his voice.

This darkness it's making me feel empty and scared.I don't know where I am.Is this a place?Am I dreaming?How do I find my way out?

Suddenly a light so bright comes in my face but it doesn't make me go blind but instead I see inside it the most beautiful things I can ever imagine.Beautiful sceneries which are filled with art , not even the most talented painter in the world couldn't put this image on a paper.

I feel my body moving towards the light without my will.I felt like a big force was pushing me into it.But when I heard Leeteuk barely speaking because of crying too much I stopped.

"I don't know what this place is but I wanna go back."I scream and the light dissapears and the dark freezes my bones.

Suddenly I'm in the hospital room.Leeteuk is facing me.


His tears melt my freezing body.I touch his cheek and smile.

"My love.Can't you see I'm alright?Stop crying!"

But his movement is strange.He touches his cheek with a worried look.I wave my hands in front of him.I look in my back and see a bunch of nurses and doctors taking care of a patient on the floor.

I see Eunhyuk holding Hyoyeon in his arms as she was crying.Why is that?Who's the patient?And why Leeteuk acts like he can't see me?

I wave my hands in front of other people but nothing.I go to the hallway maybe there someone notices me.And lucky me a guy dressed in white comes towards me.He stops in front of me and looks at me from head to toe.

"So it's you."he said with a bored,arrogant look.
"Who am I ?"
"You don't even know your own name?"
"No.I know my name and who I am.But.You were searching for me?"
"Yes.The big guy sent me to tell you the rules."
"Rules!What rules?I'm confussed."
"Aish.You don't know?"
"What?"
"You are obviously near death."And I'm devastated.This explains everything.
"What??What death?I was perfectly healthy?Am I sick?"
"Don't ask me I'm not a doctor."he says pissed.
"But....what are you?"
"Isn't it obvious?And angel."
"Judging your behaviour you seem more like a bored jerk."
"I'm a what?Do you want God to punish you."
"I apologise.You said something about some rules?"
"Yes.Your death wasn't planned by God.It was accidental.It was aimed for another person.So when this situations appear God give you some rules to be alive again.First your killer must be found and then..."

I intrrerupt him."And find 3 tears of true love like in 49 days?"(hehe where I got my inspiration from)

"Don't intrrerupt me anymore.And you are not in a drama.No.You have to wait until another person is killed like this or look after a ghost who's in the same situation.If the ghost gives up on his life you will go back to the human world and viceversa.But if you both refuse to give up on life you will both remain ghosts,stuck between 2 worlds."

"But I can't just find another ghost?"

"You will especially meet another ghost who has everything you don't and who doesn't have what you have.You will be stick to the other like glue once you find the person."

"I understand..."

"Now in the meanwhile you have to find your killer."

"Okay. I will..."And he disappears.I walk towards Leeteuk's room and find it empty.I go outside and start searching for my ghost.

I stop in front of a shops window and see myself.I'm pale like a dead.But what atracts my attention is a big bloody wound probably made by a bullet.And also notice a handsome guy coming to me through the window.


Exo-M Lay?

Notes

New character hehe <3

Comments

awwww , really thank you so much for thinking like that about me , now that my final exams finished i will start reading all of what you write ;) i will support you with all what i can <3 , you also helped me alot , by filling my free time with these amazing fanfics <3

sosolol1998 sosolol1998
1/30/15

@sosolol1998

I was determined to stop writing but then I read an amazing fanfic on the other site and got insipred to create on of that kind here too and then I fell in love with Yifan and wanted to do a fanfic with him but on asianfanfiction because I wanted to try my luck there.On that story I‘m having a block/don‘t know what to write anymore and I haven‘t uptaated in a week I think but the one here is daily updated(Who need social life hehe)but I‘ll be more than happy if you read them.You are a true support to me :3 thanksss

Lee Hye-Yoo Lee Hye-Yoo
1/17/15

i will make sure to read all of your fanfics <3 you have a great imagination :D :)
those two fanfics i will read them after my finals (one week to go )

sosolol1998 sosolol1998
1/17/15

awww thank you so much , you made me tear (really ) <3 <3 <3 and sorry i didnt read your fanfics for a long time because my finals had started , i still has one week to go . uggh i really loved this fanfic so much and i hope you can do well in your life , i hope this wont be our last farewell and i am sure that you will be a great writer in the future ;) i love you and i hope we can meet one day <3 <3 <3

sosolol1998 sosolol1998
1/17/15

oh no whyyy , :'( , you are right though , they are really time eater for both reder and writer , i really enjoyed it and hope to see more from you . yaay it will end happily :)

sosolol1998 sosolol1998
12/8/14