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A Lost Victory

Chapter 1

***from here on is basically a flashback***


You were walking through a large park during your vacation in Seoul. It had beautiful scenery, with lovely flowers, tall trees and~

"Ahh!" A tall boy came rushing by on a skateboard and knocked you over.
"Gwenchana? I'm so sorry." He ran over and helped you up.
*aish* "Ya! Watch where your going!" You pulled you hand away and dusted off.
"I didn't see you, I'll pay to have your skirt dry cleaned, I'll~"
"Ani ani, forget it." 'Are you kidding me this day is already going down hill.'

"Ya! Zelo you babo!" A blonde boy came running over and hit the back of Zelo's head. "How could you run over a pretty girl like this?" You blushed at his comment.
"Ahh! Mianae Himchan hyung."
"Ani." Himchan pointed you. Zelo pouted while holding his head, then turned to you, bowed and apologized. You waved them off, letting them know it's ok and watched them run off in the other direction. You turned laughing at their childishness and walked toward the street.

You headed to a popular café you heard about. On your way you walked passed a small, oddly nice looking alley, where a couple boys were dancing. You stopped and watched a little because the music was interesting. After a while one of them saw you and stopped.

"Ya. Ya! Jongup." He said to the other guys there, in a hushed tone. They started talking amongst themselves, but you couldn't hear them. You realized they had seen you because they were now quietly staring at you. You quickly turned around the corner and hid behind the brick wall. The music was still playing but you heard it suddenly stop. You began taking deep breaths, probably a bit too loud. You heard whispers. 'Aish. Why did I have to stop and look. Babo! Babo!'

"Youngjae........" You heard more whispers. "Wait Daehyun........." 'Why are they sliding so quietly? Wait what's that??' You heard footsteps getting louder and closer. You looked around but saw no one walking by at the time. All of a sudden you feel someone grab your waist and pull you into what looked like a small studio. You were about to scream, but a tall amazing looking, muscular guy covered your mouth.

"Shhhhhh. It's ok, just be quiet for a bit." You felt oddly safe at his words. 'Who the heck is this!? Wait is he with them??'

Notes

I'm really sorry it's taking so long for all this, I'm just updated this during art class and now I must go to band! But anyway please enjoy :)

Comments

update please <3

Jengkirk Jengkirk
5/6/14

Awwww. So adorable

ChaeROARin ChaeROARin
3/29/14

Hey i like the idea of starting it with their child, let's you know there's a happy ending, and then telling the main story as a flashback. It's well done for an intro, keep it up!

AmyWtsn AmyWtsn
3/28/14