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I'm sobbing T.T this is ... This is...
i still can't believe you killed Nari!!! But when Yeol said "we'll always be your men" I practically burst into tears my poor hearteu
Omg, this chapter was so good! I love the way you built the pace and tension throughout, and it's left me wanting more :) The part with Chanyeol was my favourite, I think, though it made me nervous to read. I can't wait to find out what happens to them all! My favourite sentence from chapter 14 was "Kai is asleep on D.O's bed" XD Love this story so much, and please keep writing <3
Omg this is getting so good!!!! Jskaksnd I love it!!!!
and Do and Baekhyun's new relationship if you can even call it that is adorable
the bananas
@asterisk
Thanks!! It was a particularly fun chapter to write. Even if jumping out of the van was a little dramatic ;P
Wow, this chapter was so tense! I love the way this story is going so far, and I'm really excited to find out what happens to the gang next :)
My gosh that twist at the end - I'm really excited to find out what happens to the gang next... I look forward to the next chapter! Fighting! xx
@Injeong
Yeah I borrowed several concepts from the M/Vs. I loved a lot of the imagery in them and wanted to incorporate it into the story. I'm glad you liked it!
Yayy!!! Baekkie comes to the rescue!! The pulling-off-his-helmet was like when he took off his hat in the Monster MV, haha ... was that deliberate? Lol
And also poor Kai :( kill Chul and those men >:( (its also like in the MV too, where they were beaten >.
Yes an update! I was literally grinning as I realised what was happening towards the end. Excellent as always and I can't wait to find out more <3
@asterisk
Thanks!! I'm super excited about it. It's sometimes difficult to keep all of the pieces moving, but hopefully it'll all come together :)
Whoa, I didn't expect Chul to return! I love this so much and I'm intrigued to see where the plot goes :) Very well written and a gripping chapter as always, can't wait for the next update <3
Omo :OOOO
Chul that evil dude >:( bad chul
Baekhyun and DO's little moment had me literally squealing xD so good!! But they're caught!! *gasp* What will happen next??
T least they're together. But this also means the police now know the whole gang - are the police even there?? Isn't chul a criminal too?
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Ikr??? This was the hardest chapter for me to write. ALL OF THE FEELS lol
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