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@PsiWren
Don't worry, Kris wasn't ACTUALLY gonna gt down in a hospital room. He was just playin around with Red, and basically teasing him. Playing with his weakness. He was just joking. He's not THAT blinding by lust, yet. XD
And about Leo, I actually added MY character into him, where when I get really big news, I kind of switch off from anything that's going around me, and only think about what I'm excited about, so, I thought that was a more unique approach to it. I mean, ANY person would act like you said,.....but not me. xP *kisses*

@lolahudson147852
Haha! Glad you like the comments! XD Sometimes, I think I comment too much! XP
And for your question, well, to add tags, you simply go on My stories, then you click on the edit button under your story. That's the page where you write the title, a description, etc. Towards the bottom of that page right before the genres, there should be a place where you can put in tags. Well, in any case, it's towards the bottom! XD I hope I helped! And don't worry! I love helping! Feel free to ask me if you need anything! ^^

Sorry for all the message-reviews. I read a LOT of fanfiction and rarely write in THIS much. I think I'm having altogether TOO much fun with your story. Btw, did anyone tell Red's family or school what happened?

One last question for the author. Right under the boldface lettering for "Kris walks in". I don't know if I'm mistaken or something, but I'm wondering why that pic is there. Isn't that a pic of my "bro" Myungsoo (a.k.a. L)? I'm a fan of Infinite, but they don't seem to be in this fic I don't think, right?

Trying to reply back to your msg from 2 hours ago. I meant the reactions that occured just before Red got shot. In example, the guys from Vixx and the driver/manager did the freeze in shock thing while Red just automatically, without even thinking about it, just leapt in and blocked the bullet.

Chpt 10: {To Kris - Really? Reallyy?! In a hospital room? Where any nurse, doctor, or janitor/clean-up person can wander in at any time? Thankfully, you seem to have come back to your senses.} [And, what kind of hospital is this, where people in patient rooms can yell and screech at each other with no one going in to check what's going on?] *To Leo - Understandably, you're happy at your news, but maybe TOO estatic? If it'd been me...personally, I think Id've also happily raced into the room but likely have come to a standstill for a moment, ask/try to figure out why Red's on the floor instead of on the bed where he SHOULD be, gotten him back on it, and THEN told him my news.*

@PsiWren
Well, he was the hero of the day, I mean, I would do the exact same thing for my friend~ x3
And of course he would just freeze up, HE GOT SHOT for cryin out loud! xP

CHPT 9: 1) Red, I don't think you're going to have as much problem with people gunning for you out of revenge as much as people trying to thank/interview you for trying to act like an out-of-spandex Clark Kent, Peter Parker, or some off-duty LEO (that's law enforcement officer for those not familiar with the show NCIS). 2) Red's reaction kinda expected. When faced with that kind of situation, I think most people would wind-up in 1 of 2 camps....take auto-pilot action and Block and/or Tackle, or freeze up in shock and/or morbid fascination.

@macoco10
I am soooo happy for the love you give to my story, and honestly, I fangirl every single time I read your comments~ x3 Thank you soooo much for the love, and you honestly give me the power to continue writing this~ x3 Thank you~ x3 *sends kisses and lots of hugs*
Can I ask you a question though?
How do you add tags to your story, cause I'm a newbie and haven't figured that out yet~ Sorry~ Thanks in advance~ x3

Woah woah woah woah WOAH!! These last 3 chapters made me literally go : /\/\/\/\/\/\/!!! So much happened!! So sad, happy, funny, dramatic, EVERYTHING!! XD And what better way to bring the mood back up than to bring in Kris and make him chase Red everywhere!! XD I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!! XD I know I've said this often, but it isn't enough to honestly describe how I feel for this story. ^^

@PsiWren First of all, your comment made me laugh soooo hard (in a good way) ~ Thank you~ xD And to comment about the characters breakdown, well, it was because this isn't just some crush, it's heart-felt love,and I really wanted to show that, and also because Kris literally confessed the day before he left, thinking that Red would be there for more days, and when he found out that he was leaving the next day, it came as a complete shock, and he broke down, because in his mind, Red was never gonna leave~ x3 They didn't even have time to do anything~ Think of it as, Psychological Shock. He loves Red THAT much~ x'3
And about the contacts, you'll find out in the following chapters~
And Red stayed for 2 MONTHS. not 2 weeks~
Thanks for reading, and ask more questions, would love to clear up your head~ x3

@PsiWren first of all, thank you for reading my fic in one sitting, and then writing a whole essay about it. Makes me feel like you actually care... x3 And I'll answer all your questions :
Ch. 3 : Yeah, I'm not really big on grammar, I just wanted to make it sound special and to be completely honest with you, I had no idea what Annual meant till now...XD (sad, right?)
Ch. 6 : Well, in the story Kris is about 23, so because of the 6 year gap, he thought he was WAY to old for Red, (and I added it for comic effect x3)
Ch. 7 : Well, to answer your question, I live in a small neighborhood in Itaewon, and I took experience from the cupcake shops we have here, which are mostly fruit, and jam related, so the chocolaty, and more rich cupcakes are considered more 'American' here~ x3

@macoco10 Oh...I'm so sorry for breaking your heart & making you cry~ x'( But, don't worry, it's not over between Red & Kris~ x3 Your welcome, and thank you sooo much for reading, and giving me support to continue this story~ Thank you~ x3

Earlier was for a couple questions I had. This one is just a comment. Chpt 6. I guess maybe they (that is, Kris and Red) are too close to and/or wrapped-up in the situation, along with the sudden reminder/knowledge that Red is actually part of a competition where he's going to be staying with various bands to really think. They're coming off like they're in Titanic-we're-going-to-drop-off-the-face-of-the-earth-and-never-see-each-other-again mode. Comment to the characters: Dudes! You might not be able to be in close/physical contact for a while, but you're not totally cut off from each other. You're telling me In those two weeks, you two never exchanged any contact information? Email? Snail mail? I know you guys have laptops/cellphones with skype, and probably face-to-face video messaging capabilities, and the usual normal phone calls (I'm going to kinda assume the two know how to send text messages as well)......sheesh.

Wow. Feeling prolific, are we? Last time I took a look at this fic (only 1-2 days ago), there was only 2 chapters. Suddenly, this a.m., found 5 additional chapters. Read 3-7 in one sitting. Ok. Questions. Ch 3: Hitting the practial/logical part of me. "Annual Monthly Student Performance Show"? How does that go? Far as I know, annual means once a year, and monthly means...well, once a month. How do you put on a "Annual Monthly" anything? Ch 6: Out of curiosity. Red gives out his age as 17. How old (or how much older) is the Kris in your fic that he's going on about feeling like he's some kind of pervy pedophile? Ch 7: Don't really get a chance to eat much Korean food myself (availability issues in the area I live in). So, I don't know too much about Korean desserts or styles of cooking. Do they do much in the way of baking? This chapter mentioned Amber bringing/making "American-style cupcakes". Is there a Korean-style of cupcake?

@lolahudson147852
Haha! X3 Well, your story really does make me feel that way and I don't really feel like I should just be silent about it! ^^ And thank you too, for writing this! ^^

I died of feels and am now buried under a pile of tissues... DX THAT WAS SO HEARTBREAKING!! D'X However, I wonder how it's going to be like with the other groups... ^^

@macoco10 I LOVE reading your comments~ And thank you so much for the love you show to my story, and your reactions are pricelss~
To be honest, I was hoping this chapter to be shocking, and exciting~
And your reaction was perfect~ XD Thank you for reading~

@macoco10 I LOVE reading your comments~ And thank you so much for the love you show to my story, and your reactions are pricelss~
To be honest, I was hoping this chapter to be shocking, and exciting~
And your reaction was perfect~ XD Thank you for reading~

OMG hahaha! I was like --> O_O the whole time of the confession and the kiss and then the moment got ruined and started laughing again! XD I love how you make me squeal because of a ship and laugh just mere seconds later!!! XD