_-*Luxury*-_

@btsforlife
https://www.wattpad.com/399160917-l-for-luxury
she is continuing on wattpad . Here is the link

@btsforlife

continue

Oooooh yoongi

@ShinRiYeon
I got you, but the finishing the lines off with quotation marks thing. Some of the lines are longer when they talk , so you might not see it until they get finished.

I really like the story line! Nice twist with that fact that they're "the richest man in Korea" ,hehe ... but as for helping you out, you could really put more space between certain parts in the story. That way it won't seem boring no matter how long the chapter is and I've only noticed that you didn't always finish speech lines with the " or not spacing them away from the rest of the story. Good work so far though! Fighting! (*^▽^*)