I beg but I can't get

This is just a repost of a story I have on Asianfanfics.com
This one is not going to be near as grammatically incorrect as the other.
Here is the link to the finished one but, the grammar is horrible:
I Beg but I can't get (editing)

1. Chapter 1

   Niel's POV

2. Chapter 2

   Niel's POV

3. Chapter 3

   Niel's POV

4. Chapter 4

   Niel's POV