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Who are you?

I will mess around with your head on the stand

”Thanks.. you may just have saved my life..” CL panted, trying to catch her breath.
They had lost the other's about a block away, this was TOP's chans to play his part.
He stumbles a little to get the girls attention, witch worked perfectly. As soon as CL turned to him he made sure she saw the red spot on his shirt by opening his jacket a bit.
”Oh god! What happened, did you get hit?!” She quickly grasped his shoulder to take a closer look and he winced in pain (Even if it didn't really hurt that much).
”Oh I'm sorry, how are you feeling? Are you feeling dizzy, nausea?” CL looked at TOP with worry.
”I'm... I can't feel my arm.. and .. and..” TOP mumbled, faking being nauseous.

Suddenly he feel forward right into CL and they both feel to the ground. CL quickly got up but TOP stayed down, hoping she would by the act.
”Hey! Open you're eyes! Can you hear me?!” He could hear CL yelling and he felt her hands on his arm, shaking it to wake him up.
It looks like she's buying it, good. TOP thought and continue playing unconscious.


Soon he could hear sirens coming closer and closer, she must have called for help. This was good, that means she really is buying his fake act.
He felt two people sitting down right beside him, starting to examine the wound and tried to talk to him. Soon he felt himself lifted into the ambulance and i could still feel CL's hand on my arm. Are she coming with me to the hospital, wow this just got better and better.


~Two hour's later~


After a smal operation TOP was lying in a hospital bed in a dark room. He was still playing unkonties because CL sat in a chair by the door and he couldn't tell if she was still awake. As he dared to look at the clook and he smiled to himself, 2 am. That means she really was concerned for him, this would be easier than he thought.
At that moment CL's phone rang and he quickly closed his eyes as CL jumped at the sound of the phone.
”Hello.” TOP could hear her say, he guess to whoever called.
”I'm sorry, i'm kind of in a bit of a situation right now.... I'm at the hospital.... NoNoNo i'm fine, but something came up.... it's a long story.... you don't need to come... i'm perfectly fine... okay, if you must then i gess you could... i'm in room 146... okay... okay.... i'll explain when you get here... okay, bye... see you... bye.” Finally CL hung up and put down her phone again.


TOP had no idea who she was talking to but he must say he was intrigued by the konversation. He heard CL standing up and walking towards him so he quickly relaxed his body.
After a while CL sighed and walked back to the chair siting down again.


~Ten minutes later~


TOP heard the door open and he heard someone com inside.
”Close the door carefully..” He heard CL say to the new person.
”Are you okay?” The person asked as he closed the door.
”As i said before, I'm fine.” CL said.
”You had me worry, why are you here?” The other person asked. ”Who is that?”
TOP assumed the person was asking about him, as he was the only one in the room beside CL.
”It's a long story, but I'll give you the sort version.” CL said before quickly telling the person what had happened.


”I kind of owe him my life.. i want to be here when he wakes up..” CL said and walked up to the bed.
This was TOP's cue to go out in the spotlight.
He moved a little before he slowly opened his eyes and blinked a few times. The first thing he saw was CL lening over him.
”Oh, you're awake!” She said with a relieved smile. ”How are you feeling?”
”Where.. Where am.. I?” TOP asked, playing confused.
”You're in the hospital, do you remember what happened?” CL asked worried.
”Yeah... i think..” TOP slowly nodded but stopped and put his hand over the bandages on his shoulder.
”How are you feeling?” CL asked again.
”Awful...” TOP signed ”But i will be okay..”
”The doctor said that you should try and sit up as soon as you woke up, something to do with the flow of blood or something, do you think you can sit up?” CL asked reaching out to help TOP.


With the help of CL he sat up and looked around the room to see a man stand near the door, a man which he immediately recognized.

Notes

This is my first crime-ish story so it can be a little slow in the beginning

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