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One Shot to Success (B.A.P)

Chapter 7

***JiHae's P.O.V***

I recently received a text from MinSeok hyung telling me that he needed some help with unpacking his stuff in a dorm room near ours. Being the good person I am, I accepted and headed for the door in a random pair of track pants that I found in the room and one of my pyjama shirts that was laying around on the bed. As I was walking out the door, Jongup caught hold of my arm and asked me where I was going, and seeing there was nothing to hide, I answered truthfully that I was going to help my hyung settle down in his temporary dorm.

“Well, could I come too? The others went to their individual schedules and I don’t have anything until later on,” he told me. There wasn’t any reason to refuse his company, so I accepted and we both headed off towards the dorm on the other side of the hall. We didn’t even knock on the door when MinSeok randomly ran out of the room with his arms wide open, as if running away from something. I guess he was aiming to hug and cling to me, but he unfortunately bumped into Jongup who was in front of me. He didn’t even realize it wasn’t me yet! And I think he didn’t realize we were with someone else so he blurted out from that big mouth of his:

“Hey, that’s strange. I knew you had really small boobs, but not to the point of them being almost nonexistent, JiHae! And did you get shorter? Woah, I like your abs!” He blabbed on and on while poking here and there on Jongup’s upper body. Jongup just proved himself of having an incredible patience and I will forever admire him for supporting the most annoying human being on Earth, other than Himchan and Daehyun of course. You know what shocked me even more, it’s that he didn’t make any hostile move towards MinSeok! He just stood there with a random monkey poking every inch of his body. However, enough is enough.

“Hyung, stop molesting Jongup hyung. I’m over here.” And with that, he slowly looked at the direction from which my voice came from and when he saw me, his eyes grew as large as golf balls. He then turned his head towards the unknown torso he was poking and patting repeatedly, and then towards the face of the stranger. Finally, he notices that whoever he was on for the past moments was none other than someone whom he should have used more discretion around. Now having a tomato-red face, he jumped off Jongup and ran into his little shelter, not forgetting to slam the door closed on our noses. We could hear random screaming from inside, such as ‘Stupid, stupid, stupid...’ and ‘You gay, bro? You suddenly gay?’ and even ‘How can I mistake pecs for boobs...’. Wait. Since when does he know how big are my boobs?!

“YAH! You little turd! Instead of comparing boobs to pecs, come out here and apologize to hyung!” I shrieked through the crack of the door. The crack slightly widened and my brother’s face could be partially seen through the small crevice. He was still as red as when he left and I could see his eyes were beginning to become teary in the corners. Sometimes, MinSeok can really be sensitive and a big cry baby making a fuss out of every single thing that happens.

“I’m sorry for disturbing your privacy, Jongup-ssi. It will never happen again,” he said while bowing deeply all the while never taking his eyes off his feet, as if his worn out converse were more interesting than either of us.

“It’s ok,” he responded with a bright smile on his face. How he still keeps his cool is a mystery to me. Hyung would’ve been long gone on the moon in nothing but his underwear which has been stretched to make a wedgie over his head if it were me. “Hyung, didn’t you say something earlier about the maknae here having boobs earlier?” he swiftly asked with one eyebrow raised. Uh… I think I’m caught.

Notes

I'm sorry for being such a horrible person and updating late! T^T I have a lot of studying to do because my grades in the last report card... well... let's say my parents freaked out and nearly made me go deaf. And so, I now have to study harder and longer to get over 90% in every single subject at school (and I'm pretty sure I will go deaf for sure if I don't get those grades...). Also, sorry again for making this seem like a filler chapter and seem way shorter than all my previous chapters because, in fact, it was around two to four times shorter... Sigh... If I wrote something longer, the rest would've been mainly sentences consisting of math equations and French, English, and Spanish grammar rules from all the studying I've done since I received the report card. :P I'll update as soon as possible and I'll try to make it longer!

~Author-nim

Comments

@macoco10
I usually keep plugging on this method of chapter installments, then when it's all done, I then go back and rewrite it and post it to another site. And vice versa. Like a rough draft & final draft. But do what your heart tells you to.

AmyWtsn AmyWtsn
8/20/15

@AmyWtsn
Haha, thank you for telling me! I do the same but then, i realize somethings and want to change so I'm going to see if i should restart it (I'll still keep this version up) or continue and go with my mistakes and try to make it work in someway... Laziness... lets hope we find a cure soon! XD And thanks again! ^^

macoco10 macoco10
8/20/15

Ah, laziness... I know that one. I'm not going to tel you how many months it's been since I updated my story last. Has it been a year yet? But no one has posted a comment asking for more so I'm not going to sweat it. LOL. I do hope you'd continue this story. I always write my chapters out in Word beforehand then publish, that way I can sleep on them and make some tweaks before they're out there. You know, like real authors do. LOL. This chapter installments is more like Charles Dickens and I never liked his style because it was too wordy. LOL. Best of luck which ever way you choose to go about it. Oh and let me know if you find a cure for laziness, I could use a dose myself!

AmyWtsn AmyWtsn
8/20/15

Yeah, i still remember you! XD
Thank you! I'm getting discharged Tuesday, so I'll have more time to continue writing. (I'll explain my complete abscence from this in my next update) Well, maybe not since i have exams from the ministry of education the day after I'm discharged. -.-
Thank you for liking this and commenting! I thought people forgot about this story witht the time, not that many people read it in the first place... Thank you agIn for everything! (Now it's your turn to lemme hug YOU! XD) ^_^

macoco10 macoco10
5/15/15

Hii~ I'm the author of 0330 (if you still remember, lol)
I'm here to say that this story is great! No lie ^^ Though, get well soon if you're still not feeling well. I'll look out for an update :)

lilichoo lilichoo
5/15/15