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One Shot to Success (B.A.P)

Chapter 9

***JiHae's P.O.V***

"The start is SECRET! Hello, we are SECRET!" they bowed to me, flashing the cute smiles I've always loved to see when I was younger. The three girls in front of me we're at least 10 cm smaller than me, but I think that only added to their cuteness. They were so adorable!! I had completely forgotten about my annoyance towards the tallest of them, which I think was the maknae. She had the maknae vibe to her. Well, they all had a maknae vibe, I guess. Haha!

As they introduced themselves, I swear my eyes were twinkling with love for my past role models. Wait a second... One, two, three... Where's the fourth member?! Zelo must have seen me looking at the three of them and then around me so he said:

"Hey, where's Hyosung noona? Why'd only you three come?"

"Hyosung unnie is talking with manager oppa back in the lobby, and the conversation was mostly something in between them, so we decided to come back to the dorm when we bumped into Youngjae and the rest. They invited us to come see the new maknae, which I suppose is you," the girl who spoke turned around to me while saying that last part. "Jieun is right! You're so cute!" she squealed and ran up to me giving me a hug. I just stood there, not moving an inch. Out of nowhere, the door slammed open, as if it were the best time for anyone to appear.

"JIHAE~ GUESS WHO IS MY ROOMMATE!! IT'S H-" if you haven't guessed already, yes, it's MinSeok... I swear he's gonna get it this time if he does anything to embarrass me in front of Secret.

"STOP MOLESTING MY BABY!!" He suddenly jumped on me like he had done to Jongup accidentally earlier today. Someone give me patience. Just a tiny bit. My left eye twitched a couple of times before I finally pushed him off me onto the ground and walked to an area away from him, my face now pink with frustration.

"Tell me who it is and leave. You're not only embarrassing me in front of the people I will be working with but you're embarrassing yourself as well," I answered, trying to hide the irritation in my voice.

"You won't believe it! Even I don't believe it! I mean, I never knew his room could be as messy as the horror we saw earlier," he, Jongup, and I all shuddered at the mention of the dorm, "but after all, he was never really the type to clean after himself anyway. As I was saying, I couldn't believe it when I saw it, but he was even more surprised to see me! He thought he was hallucinating! He asked me to punch him and being the good friend I am, I punched him really har-"

"Just tell me who he is already!" I interrupted him quickly, not wanting to hear him review his life story. "It's Han Bin!" he exclaimed happily and clapped like a child on his birthday. Oh joy. Another problem in my life...

Notes

Ok... yes i know it's been a VERY long time since the last update. And this is not even a new chapter. Those who follow me on WattPad know what i mean. i decided to update all i could from WattPad before dropping the news i wanted to say. Once more, I'm really sorry... Oh, and those who want to know when I'm updating Slaughter House, i will as soon as i transfer the written story from paper to my computer when it's fixed! ^^

-Author-nim

Comments

@macoco10
I usually keep plugging on this method of chapter installments, then when it's all done, I then go back and rewrite it and post it to another site. And vice versa. Like a rough draft & final draft. But do what your heart tells you to.

AmyWtsn AmyWtsn
8/20/15

@AmyWtsn
Haha, thank you for telling me! I do the same but then, i realize somethings and want to change so I'm going to see if i should restart it (I'll still keep this version up) or continue and go with my mistakes and try to make it work in someway... Laziness... lets hope we find a cure soon! XD And thanks again! ^^

macoco10 macoco10
8/20/15

Ah, laziness... I know that one. I'm not going to tel you how many months it's been since I updated my story last. Has it been a year yet? But no one has posted a comment asking for more so I'm not going to sweat it. LOL. I do hope you'd continue this story. I always write my chapters out in Word beforehand then publish, that way I can sleep on them and make some tweaks before they're out there. You know, like real authors do. LOL. This chapter installments is more like Charles Dickens and I never liked his style because it was too wordy. LOL. Best of luck which ever way you choose to go about it. Oh and let me know if you find a cure for laziness, I could use a dose myself!

AmyWtsn AmyWtsn
8/20/15

Yeah, i still remember you! XD
Thank you! I'm getting discharged Tuesday, so I'll have more time to continue writing. (I'll explain my complete abscence from this in my next update) Well, maybe not since i have exams from the ministry of education the day after I'm discharged. -.-
Thank you for liking this and commenting! I thought people forgot about this story witht the time, not that many people read it in the first place... Thank you agIn for everything! (Now it's your turn to lemme hug YOU! XD) ^_^

macoco10 macoco10
5/15/15

Hii~ I'm the author of 0330 (if you still remember, lol)
I'm here to say that this story is great! No lie ^^ Though, get well soon if you're still not feeling well. I'll look out for an update :)

lilichoo lilichoo
5/15/15