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SEULMI’S POV
Always making the wrong choices.
“Um…. Jiwon-si….” I knocked at her door. It was next day, probably 4:30 pm.
“Oh… Seulmi…” She smiled. “Please come inside.” She said.
“No…. I just came here to ask… can i go outside? Its suffocating inside.” I asked.
“Ah… you don’t have to ask. Go but be back before dark.”
“Oh… thank you.” I bowed and came out.
I took slow walk along the road side, thinking about the mistakes I’ve done so far. The fear of being caught by him again haunted me at night. It was like a horrible nightmare, being alone in that room, and waiting for him to come and pierce me here or there. I wondered if he had found another prey. I wish he could just die right now.
Before leaving Ravi oppa’s house, I did something I, even, couldn’t believe I did but it was necessary, since I had to do it. I called him.
HIMCHAN’S POV
“I knew it; I knew it she would come back.” I took another turn swiftly and reached my house, before she could. I wanted to make everything alright. I loved her and wanted to undo what I did.
“I was horrible Seulmi, but I wont let you regret your choice this time, I’ll adore you more than anything… just gimme a chance.” I muttered. I saw the sun setting more slowly that day. I smiled but my inside was totally excited to be able to see her again.
SEULMI’S POV
“N oppa must be aware now…” I felt my body shaking as I sat on a bench, rethinking my recent decision.
I wont be able to be with Ravi oppa if I did this but …… I had to do it….. I had to. He was a threat, not to me but to some other girls too, I guess. There is no cure to Hematodipsia, that’s what the doctor told us.
I got up and closed my fist. “I am sorry Ravi oppa.” I sighed.
I opened the door to the room. As the door slid away, I saw the shadow of his slim body. He turned around to look at me. He was playing cool. Tsk tsk.
He looked into my eyes affectionately. I had my small bag with me.
“Seulmi… I am still yours.” Himchan spread his arms as I moved forward. He pulled me in his embrace. “You made me suffer a lot.” He whispered.
“Huh… YOU.... made suffer a lot more.”I replied.
“I wont do it anymore.”
I again smiled at how skillfully he lied to me. I parted slightly and looked into his eyes which were constantly staring at me with affection. Why?
I held his cheeks softly, feeling his fine features with my finger tips. He smiled.
“Seulmi… is there something you’re hiding?” to my surprise he asked an accurate question, leaving me startled.
I pulled my hands back. His hands were still holding my waist.
“Himchan….” I stroked my hair to one side, showing my bare neck. “If you want to… you can do it once.” I looked away.
“Why? Why once?” He asked. “You’ve decided something, right? I can clearly read your eyes.”
“Then you must have read my intentions to kill you.” I replied.
He chuckled.
“I am serious.” I said and his expression changed swiftly.
He glared this time. “I wont do it anymore.” He said.
“you WOULD…. You cant hide your inner desire to do so; and when you’re done with me, you’ll find another girl to do so.” I said.
He again chuckled. I rolled my eyes. “Your blood is the only thing that satisfies my thirst. I am not lying.” He said.
“Then you’re even more dangerous.”
“Seulmi… I told you…. I won’t do it again ever.”
I smiled yet again, as a tear fell out of my eye.
“So you won’t take back your decision.” He removed his hands over my waist.
I held his cheek again and kissed him, as our last kiss. I closed my eyes. He stood still, not making a single motion. My inner feelings were screaming and crying, like a storm of mixed emotion was destroying me from inside and outside.
I parted my lips. He placed his hands inside his pockets.
“How are you planning to do that?” He asked and I took out a handgun from my bag, pointing it straight at him as I distanced. I took more steps backward.
“Seulmi…. Do you think you can hit me with this?” He stared and gulped.
“Didn’t you make me practice it a month ago?” I tried to smirk but failed.
“Would you be able to handle the sound it would make, along with me dying? Would you?” He asked.
My hands, my legs, my whole body was shaking.
“You’d regret killing m---“
“NO I WONT…. After killing you, I would finally be able to be with the right person.” i yelled.
“Right person? Ravi~?” he asked, leaving me utterly shocked.
“YEAH? GOT ANY PROBLEM?” I loaded the gun swiftly.
He took slow steps towards me.
“Don’t move, or I’ll sh-shoot without a second thought.” I warned him.
“You wont be able to shoot. You are afraid of the banging sounds.” He knew how to control my movements. He knew how to manipulate my mind. It was the worst for me to be controlled at a time like this; but I really couldn’t shoot.
He finally reached me and stood really close to me.
“You cannot shoot until I accompany you, remember?” He held the gun through my hand. “And can I have my last bite?” He smirked with dull eyes which were bright a few minutes ago.
“NO.” I cried
“I wont let you be with the right person….cuz you will always be mine.” With his other free hand, he pulled my neck towards his mouth. I felt a current of numbness running through my body.
He inhaled in the scent released from my skin. “Sugar…..” He moaned and dug his fangs into the front of my neck piercing through and through, reaching my pharynx. I could hardly produce any sound. It was the most painful experience of my life where I lost my breath.
While sucking in blood and roughly cutting down my skin, he placed the handgun on the side of his forehead. He pulled the trigger and injured his head.
We both fell on the ground, lifeless.
I will remember the kisses we shared and the good time, the only good time; that was when I loved you. And how I gave you all of me and you used it mercilessly, and still, I loved you helplessly. I wont forget this room, where you imprisoned me and now, we are lying here on the floor, your canines still inside my skin, both bodies absorbed into each other, dead.
AUTHOR’S POV
In the end, she made another wrong decision and didn’t trust Ravi.
Girls shouldn’t be good or bad; they should be WISE.
Always making the wrong choices.
“Um…. Jiwon-si….” I knocked at her door. It was next day, probably 4:30 pm.
“Oh… Seulmi…” She smiled. “Please come inside.” She said.
“No…. I just came here to ask… can i go outside? Its suffocating inside.” I asked.
“Ah… you don’t have to ask. Go but be back before dark.”
“Oh… thank you.” I bowed and came out.
I took slow walk along the road side, thinking about the mistakes I’ve done so far. The fear of being caught by him again haunted me at night. It was like a horrible nightmare, being alone in that room, and waiting for him to come and pierce me here or there. I wondered if he had found another prey. I wish he could just die right now.
Before leaving Ravi oppa’s house, I did something I, even, couldn’t believe I did but it was necessary, since I had to do it. I called him.
HIMCHAN’S POV
“I knew it; I knew it she would come back.” I took another turn swiftly and reached my house, before she could. I wanted to make everything alright. I loved her and wanted to undo what I did.
“I was horrible Seulmi, but I wont let you regret your choice this time, I’ll adore you more than anything… just gimme a chance.” I muttered. I saw the sun setting more slowly that day. I smiled but my inside was totally excited to be able to see her again.
SEULMI’S POV
“N oppa must be aware now…” I felt my body shaking as I sat on a bench, rethinking my recent decision.
I wont be able to be with Ravi oppa if I did this but …… I had to do it….. I had to. He was a threat, not to me but to some other girls too, I guess. There is no cure to Hematodipsia, that’s what the doctor told us.
I got up and closed my fist. “I am sorry Ravi oppa.” I sighed.
I opened the door to the room. As the door slid away, I saw the shadow of his slim body. He turned around to look at me. He was playing cool. Tsk tsk.
He looked into my eyes affectionately. I had my small bag with me.
“Seulmi… I am still yours.” Himchan spread his arms as I moved forward. He pulled me in his embrace. “You made me suffer a lot.” He whispered.
“Huh… YOU.... made suffer a lot more.”I replied.
“I wont do it anymore.”
I again smiled at how skillfully he lied to me. I parted slightly and looked into his eyes which were constantly staring at me with affection. Why?
I held his cheeks softly, feeling his fine features with my finger tips. He smiled.
“Seulmi… is there something you’re hiding?” to my surprise he asked an accurate question, leaving me startled.
I pulled my hands back. His hands were still holding my waist.
“Himchan….” I stroked my hair to one side, showing my bare neck. “If you want to… you can do it once.” I looked away.
“Why? Why once?” He asked. “You’ve decided something, right? I can clearly read your eyes.”
“Then you must have read my intentions to kill you.” I replied.
He chuckled.
“I am serious.” I said and his expression changed swiftly.
He glared this time. “I wont do it anymore.” He said.
“you WOULD…. You cant hide your inner desire to do so; and when you’re done with me, you’ll find another girl to do so.” I said.
He again chuckled. I rolled my eyes. “Your blood is the only thing that satisfies my thirst. I am not lying.” He said.
“Then you’re even more dangerous.”
“Seulmi… I told you…. I won’t do it again ever.”
I smiled yet again, as a tear fell out of my eye.
“So you won’t take back your decision.” He removed his hands over my waist.
I held his cheek again and kissed him, as our last kiss. I closed my eyes. He stood still, not making a single motion. My inner feelings were screaming and crying, like a storm of mixed emotion was destroying me from inside and outside.
I parted my lips. He placed his hands inside his pockets.
“How are you planning to do that?” He asked and I took out a handgun from my bag, pointing it straight at him as I distanced. I took more steps backward.
“Seulmi…. Do you think you can hit me with this?” He stared and gulped.
“Didn’t you make me practice it a month ago?” I tried to smirk but failed.
“Would you be able to handle the sound it would make, along with me dying? Would you?” He asked.
My hands, my legs, my whole body was shaking.
“You’d regret killing m---“
“NO I WONT…. After killing you, I would finally be able to be with the right person.” i yelled.
“Right person? Ravi~?” he asked, leaving me utterly shocked.
“YEAH? GOT ANY PROBLEM?” I loaded the gun swiftly.
He took slow steps towards me.
“Don’t move, or I’ll sh-shoot without a second thought.” I warned him.
“You wont be able to shoot. You are afraid of the banging sounds.” He knew how to control my movements. He knew how to manipulate my mind. It was the worst for me to be controlled at a time like this; but I really couldn’t shoot.
He finally reached me and stood really close to me.
“You cannot shoot until I accompany you, remember?” He held the gun through my hand. “And can I have my last bite?” He smirked with dull eyes which were bright a few minutes ago.
“NO.” I cried
“I wont let you be with the right person….cuz you will always be mine.” With his other free hand, he pulled my neck towards his mouth. I felt a current of numbness running through my body.
He inhaled in the scent released from my skin. “Sugar…..” He moaned and dug his fangs into the front of my neck piercing through and through, reaching my pharynx. I could hardly produce any sound. It was the most painful experience of my life where I lost my breath.
While sucking in blood and roughly cutting down my skin, he placed the handgun on the side of his forehead. He pulled the trigger and injured his head.
We both fell on the ground, lifeless.
I will remember the kisses we shared and the good time, the only good time; that was when I loved you. And how I gave you all of me and you used it mercilessly, and still, I loved you helplessly. I wont forget this room, where you imprisoned me and now, we are lying here on the floor, your canines still inside my skin, both bodies absorbed into each other, dead.
AUTHOR’S POV
In the end, she made another wrong decision and didn’t trust Ravi.
Girls shouldn’t be good or bad; they should be WISE.
Notes
Finally DONE. I tried to give a positive message... i hope you liked it cuz it was the only way to end this.... i had this in my mind from the start.
Really love you guys for supporting my stupid story.... hehe.....
I'll tell you guys about how i managed to get all the ideas in authors note, coming up next... then i'll mark the story complete.
(using pov was difficult as it was my first time using it)
claps ^_^ unnie done the gr8 job
8/21/15