Uncontrolable Revenge

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•Minwoo•

"Omma! Appa!" I sob while walking into the burnt house.

"Omm...omma! A...appa!"

"Chabarl! You have to be alive!" I say.

I step on A rusty item And the noise crackles a little.

I look down.

"Omma! Appa!" I scream flooding tears from my eyes.

I see my mom and Dad laying on the ground right beside each other all burnt and rusty.

It's worst than you think. Seeing your parents burnt up but still perfectly shaped.

"Omma!!!! Appa!!!!!" I scream and cry.

A piece of wood drops down infront of me and burns my back.

My sobs get louder so i Run Away.

"Omma! Appa!" I cry while walking on the side walk.

As i walk a Couple of hours i see a boat and people gathering around it.

"Uncle?" I whisper while walking up To it.

"Im Sure thats my uncle. If it is then he can help Me Right?" I think to myself.

I Run up to The boat and as it takes off i Jump at the Edge of it.

I look around for my uncle.

"That's not my uncle.." i think to myself.

The shore is only 13 feet away but I can't swim.

SPLASH!!!
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*FlashBack*

"Omma! Appa! Im home!" I yell from The front porch.

"Omma?"

"Minwoo-ah don't come here!" I Hear my omma and appa continuesly say.

"Whae(why)? I got an A+ at school today! Dont you wanna see it?" I Ask.

"If u leave now i'll take you to go See the firework show." Omma says.

"Yaksokhae(promise)?" I ask.

"Promise! I pro-"

A flame of fire comes bursting at me and in Seconds the whole house is burnt up.

"Omma? Appa?" I yell.

I See a man run out.

"Appa?"

He glares at me and i take A good look At his face.

"You!!" I scream while trying to catch up to him.

I Suddenly trip on my own Shoe.

"Anthwe! You cant leave!" I Scream.
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Water splashes on My face And gets in my nose.

"Yah!" I scream while getting up.

"Kid Are you okay?" A man asks.

"What happend?" I panic.

"We were escaping to the north and we heard a splash. We all saw you drowning so We

decided to pick you up And Help you." One says.

"Kamsamida... but i have to Go back!" I yell.

"How old Are u?" A man asks.

"11. Whae?"

"You cant go. Your too young to go alone." Someone says.

"Someone come with me then!" I yell.

"We Cant. Chaesonghaeyo..."

"Whae! My parents just burst into Flames and i need to find my Relitaves!" I Scream.

"Sorry kid... to pay you back We'll take care of you."

"Dēk mā thì nì(kid come over here in thai)." A Sweet lady said to me.

I run up to her feeling safer because she's a girl and not a scary looking Guy, even

though im A guy.

"Khun sāmārth phūd phās'ā thiy dî(can you speak thai)?" She asks.

"Nid «hnxy «(A Little bit)." I Answer.

"Pwy thor hā khun Juanmaen(Ill call you JuanMaen[Huan-men])." She says in a sweet voice.
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*7 years later*

"Do It correctly!" My Phx(dad)(Pa) yells at me.

"Yes.. I'll do it correctly!" I say as I point the gun Up And shoot.

It hits the side of the middle.

"Pa! I did it!"

He looks At me disapointed.

"Right in the middle of the heart!" He scolds me.

"Sir he did better than the other teenagers his age boss." My trainer said.

"He needs to do better." My pa says while walking Away.
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I Walk To town with my friends.

As we Walk i see a man shooting guns on a target, but badly.

"Wow!" I Say Grabbing the gun and pointing It At the target.

The man glares at me In A angry Face.

I Shoot at The target hitting it directly in The middle, better than before.

"Thats how your supposed to do it!" I say While putting The gun in the mans hands.

"Go!" I here the man yell as his crew Chases after me.

"Woah! He Thinks He Can catch me!" I yell so he Can hear me.

The men run faster almost catching up to Me.

"Yah! I was just joking!" I yell.

They go Faster.

I Climb Up a Tree and onto the Roof of A house jumping from roof to roof.

I Jump off a tree And run into a boat that goes back to my Hometown.

"Lā kxn(Bye)!" I wave at them.
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"Juanmaen your back!" My Mæ(mom) says.

"Young man!" I hear the voice of the man from earlier Call.

I grab my mom And hide her in a Corner while Grabbing a gun and gaurding her.

I Run behind A pole And get ready To Shoot. The Doors burst open And gunshots shoot

everywhere.

I can hear the man tiptoe close by.

"Jaunmaen!" I hear my mom call As she walks up to Warn me who's there.

"Anthwe! Omma!" I yell in Korean On Accident.

But in a split second she falls to the ground.

Shes been Shot

"Im gonna get you!" I yell chasing after the Men with A gun.

As i chase the men they shoot Every person they an Find.

"Anthwe!" I Scream.

When i panic I always speak korean.

I continue chasing, but I just notice I'm passing by dying innocent people.

"Anthwe! You cant do this!" I say in My most angry Voice.

I can feel the tears Dropping down My Face And flying off my Face.

As i Chase them to the Water they stop running.

"Please! We cant Swim!" The men say praying.

Not being Able to Hold my anger No longer i randomly shoot everywhere wasting my Bullets.

I look Around seeing bullets in trees And blood in The river.
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Notes

The thai translations is what I got from google translate. Sorry is I spelt thai words wrong if you know how to read it in english letters.