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Tell me Good-Bye

Getting Close

Your Pov----

Jin brought out the food, Thought I heard him say something. Maybe it's just my imagination...It feels like our first date agiain. Jin what are you doing to me. We both just ate in silence but It was not awkward at all. It feels nice to be with him again, alone like this.

"Jin-ah, why did you bring me here?"
I ask

"Wae? do you want to leave?"
He poutes

"Anniyo, I just wanted to know. it's been a while since we both came here together. It feels nice."
I smile

"Your smile... it looks beautiful but it holds such a deep and sad meaning...please show me your true smile, the one where you always had on when I was your happiness."


"I don't think I could do the anymore..."
my head lays low

Jin Pov----

It kills me to see her like this. How come I never notice her smile until Junsu told me. How could I make her smile into a happy one. ottoke? Kim SeokJin think of something. Arg!!!

"Gwenchana? Jin-ah, you look stress."
Min ask

"Oh,it's nothing, lets walk on the beach."
I grab her soft hand

We both walk side by side. we did the same thing on our first date. Min, I was an idiot to let you walk away from me. If only I could go back in time and undo everything. My heart is deating to time as fast just being next to her, my hands are sweating as well. I wipe my swaet and interlock my hands with Min. She looks at me, our hands, and back at me again. Min stop walking.

" I know a dark place where we can see the stars shine better."

"eodi?"


I did not say a word at all but drag Min with me. This feels like a dream, I get to hold Min's soft small hands again.

Your Pov----

I ask Jin where are we going but he doesn't respond back to me. Jin led the way while holding my hand. I stay a little behind Jin so we are not side be side. 'A DARK PLACE SO WE CAN SEE THE STAR SHINES BETTER' but if it's to dark I won't be able to see my star's face. I smile as I follow Jin to where ever he is taking me. When we got to the place it was really dark but the sky looks beautiful and the moon shines bright as well.

"Ah, yeppueda! neomu neomu yeppueda!"

Jin letted go of my hand so I could walk on my own. I was walking when I tripped over a tree root. Before my face could be planted into earth. I felt a pair of hand holding my waist. My face became red when I realized it was Jin. I quickly backed away but clumsy me decide to trip over my own feet and fall on top of Jin. Ugh, I hope it's dark enough that he doesn't sehow embarrassed I am. Our lips barely touching, I could feel his wam breath tangle on my upper lip. I tried getting up but Jin pulled me back down. His arm wrapped aound my waist, not letting go.

" Jin-ah..."
I cut off

"Gajima, gajima..."
Jin whispers

Although it was dark I could see his face perfectly fine. Our eyes made contact with each other, not looking anywhere else. then my eyes followed down to his lips. I really want to feel his lip on mine but I can't. I tried getting back up but Jin pulled me back down again. This time Jin is on top of me. He came in closer, not leaving any gap in between.


Notes

Whew! Updated So what do you all think? now...it's time for me to do my Physic and PreCalculas homework.

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Comments

The feels are real :,(

@bila
thank you I feel honored, I'm glad you like it

asheikM asheikM
1/17/16

♥♥ woah so great ♥ ♥ i'm going to translate it for the arab kpop lovers they'll love it for sure ♥ ♥
all the right will be reserved for you ♥ ♥

bila bila
1/12/16

My Feelz

Beloved1230 Beloved1230
12/28/15

Otoke!!! How can you do this to me author? Making cry my eyes out.. this is really touching

Dami tyler Dami tyler
9/1/15