Candle Lights - Comments

@PsiWren
It sounds awesome, I'll change it to that when I get home today. Thanks for the collaboration :) hahah

Chapter 5 comment: Hey, Alex. Was re-reading. How's this sound?

Excerpt:
["Don't be weak V!" - J-Hope said dramatically stopping him in his course to my face. (That's one odd sentence there xD) - "We must ressist to her deadly charm"]

To: ["Don't be weak V!" J-Hope said dramatically (posing like some hero or General in a costumed K-drama), making V and several of the other boys who had been intent on pinching or tickling her stop in their tracks, "We must resist her deadly charm!"]

@AlexShankar

No problem. Nothing big. Was just trying to picture the scene in my head while I was reading & came to a screeching halt when the character suddenly changed in mid-stream.

@PsiWren
When V breaks and tries to run to her, J-Hope kind of holds all of the boys dramatically to stop them, so Jin is also taken by his grip, and then frees himself to run towards her. Does this help? Thanks for pointing that out, if you have any other comments please feel free to speak up :)

Chpt 5 comment: {Blink}

Excerpt:

["No! Not the puppy face! I can’t take it!" – V said already running over....

"Don't be weak V!" - J-Hope said dramatically stopping him in his course....

"Ok, I give up!" - Jin got off J-hope's grip and hugged me - "You're just too cute to resist"]

(scratching my head here) So, V ran over, J-Hope grabbed him, then Jin pulled out of J-Hope's grab? Which one was it exactly that did that? Or, did both Jin and V run over to try and pinch the main character's cheeks and J-Hope grabbed both of them?

I like it keep up the good work.