annoying neighbor - Comments

I LOVE IT SOOOOOO MUCH plezzzzzz complet

This is probably on of the worst written fanfics I've read. I think If you'll keep writing stories you need to realize that "omg" and two continuously repeating phrases don't make a story. you aren't writing your facebook post nor a text message. Go read a book(you'll need to read probably a 100) and you'll see that this here has nothing to do with writing. I'm sorry for being rude, but it's for your own good...

This is probably on of the worst written fanfics I've read. I think If you'll keep writing stories you need to realize that "omg" and two continuously repeating phrases don't make a story. you aren't writing your facebook post nor a text message. Go read a book(you'll need to read probably a 100) and you'll see that this here has nothing to do with writing. I'm sorry for being rude, but it's for your own good...